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Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A litRPG story of a gamer who just wants to get away, someone who just wants to have a little online break from life. Not needing people or the bright lights he ends up far in the north. Determined to have fun and level up without a guild controlling his online life, Octo begins his adventures only to find that sometimes life just will not let go of a person even in a game.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- kieronuchee
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 314
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Steve MossRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Good story so far, though the goblin sex was just strange.
MC wants to avoid people and rest, so creates a VR character in an out of the way village. It's to be a relaxing vacation for someone who cannot afford to travel. Things don't go according to plan. - ShinyRockRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Grammar is decent, not many issues a few spelling errors here and there. I don't know I'm only really bothered by spelling. Charecters are strange, nonsensicle and a fair bit inscruitable but considering the story lacks the 'Harem' tag or the sexual content tag why is there sex? The MC seems like he could be interesting but yelling down people in power and they listen?! That makes no sense. Also despite his charecterisation the MC never actualy acts uncomfortable around large numbers of people. The MC and many charecters just act really odd and not at all like they are charecterized.
Lots of potential but the delivery kills it.