Guardians of the Multiverse (That Time My OP Portal Skill Broke All of Fiction)

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An AI Dungeon game turned Epic, edited with the help of DeepSeek. A survivalist from Texas woke up on a god's battlefield. His only weapon is the one they can't see: he knows how all their stories end. The Liminal Nexus is breaking, pulling heroes from across realities, from magical forests to rebel starships, and war-torn glass lands, into a dying Forerunner shield world. Their common enemy includes the Banished, a brutal alien legion picking the multiverse apart. To get everyone home, pragmatic prepper and mentally unstable Bubba must unite this impossible alliance. His advantage? He recognizes them. He knows the knight's hidden guilt, the pilot's lost hope, the hero's cursed power. In this war, his meta-knowledge is his greatest weapon, and the most dangerous secret he has to keep. One obnoxiously oversized crossover to rule them all! Expect battles, rising stakes, found family, romance, therapy, card games, and fix it's galore!

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: TheLonelyRanger

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Rating: 2.6/ 5.0
Followers: 41
Views: 28,127

What readers say about Guardians of the Multiverse (That Time My OP Portal Skill Broke All of Fiction)

“Bro, uploading 3 chapters a day is already impressive enough. The quality of writing is also good. The rhythm of the story isn't too stiff either. Coming from someone who just started writing. Continue with the good work. Also, the abstract story might feel…”
voidseeker200Royal Road4.0 / 5
“If I may offer a piece of advice without offending you, you're making all the characters except Bubba look incredibly stupid compared to their canonical counterparts. A third of the characters are supposed to be war veterans and tactical experts, and the re…”
daniele lorenzo borghiRoyal Road2.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

voidseeker200Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Bro, uploading 3 chapters a day is already impressive enough. The quality of writing is also good. The rhythm of the story isn't too stiff either. Coming from someone who just started writing. Continue with the good work. Also, the abstract story might feel too tangled if it's too complex.
daniele lorenzo borghiRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
If I may offer a piece of advice without offending you, you're making all the characters except Bubba look incredibly stupid compared to their canonical counterparts. A third of the characters are supposed to be war veterans and tactical experts, and the rest are heroes accustomed to critical situations and therefore accustomed to making quick decisions, but strangely, they're incapable of planning on their own and are completely dependent on Bubba's plans.
So, where are Anakin's war criminal plans? Why is Bubba and not the UNSC scientist, the one proposing how to use precursory technology? All the characters seem incapable of thinking for themselves. Why, in terms of organizing the teams, letting Bubba choose when there are highly competent military officers around who seem to only be surprised by Bubba's plans and revelations and shout "brilliant!"?
Give individual characters some space in the planning and maybe make them less inclined to trust him? Why does everyone believe Bubba after a couple of minutes of chatting? Trust is usually earned, not given. They should ask each other about each other's capabilities before collaborating to figure out how to make the teams work.
If you were a Star Wars rebel, would you confidently trust a stranger, or worse, the UNSC, without doing a bit of research? Why the hell would the UNSC give 30-kg talo armor and military-grade weapons to a civilian with no military training? Don't the Republic's Jedi sense there's something wrong with the Spartans?
You're creating huge plot holes and over-glorifying the protagonist's abilities, belittling the rest of the cast, and making the story move too quickly when it comes to character interactions, skipping all the potential controversies between the various groups and throwing them straight into the action.
PS: I think the action scenes are well done.