Greyblood: Progenitor (A LitRPG Series)

Self-Published

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Description

A Shipwreck. A Half-Orc battling for control of his mind. Things that go bump in the night.

This story includes the following:

- Half Monster MC- Game mechanics in a Fantasy world- Sword and Board MC- Crafting abilities like Enchantment and BlacksmithingUpdated every two or three days

Information

Status
Ongoing
Year
2019

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
777
Views
8,058

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • shader009Royal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    An excellent start but you've probably spoiled some of the story with your synopsis. We know what will happen eventually even if we don't know how it will come to pass. Fix that to keep some suspense going and you'll be golden. Also really can't wait for the updates. It's THAT good. Looking forward to more.
  • gary0044187Royal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    great start, looking forward to where this goes!
  • FalbeloRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    Great interactions between characters. I like the perspectives that were presented and the backgrounds tat are revealed for each.
    Personally, I think it had a strong opening and kep with engaged.
    No obsene use of stat system to pad chapters.
    Overall style and grammar score are high, but could use a light edit to improve.
    The story is original and is giving a humanized 'monster' perspective for it which I find exciting.
    I think its a killer story and if the pace continues it will be a story that is could easily be one of the better LitRPGs on RR.
    Looking forward to more Lugor and crafting.
  • Havoc the YoungerRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    Funny, thrilling, and funny to boot! If you're looking for good humor, magic, and youthful shenanigans mixes with serious danger...you should give it a shot πŸ˜‰
  • SkifflebiscuitRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    I'm working my way through this litrpg and have only gotten through the first arrc, but what I've read I've liked. Strong characterization of the MC so far. With a good start to his journey, our hero follows the classical path of awakening to his power and setting out on his quest to find himself, having outgrown his village.
    I've favorited and followed this story. It definitely captured my interest. I want to see what Lugor does next.
  • Alex MRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 5.0
    Many litrpgs on RR feel very rushed, leaving little time for any real character development, particularly in side characters. Adventurer Academy has taken the time to establish a setting, and introduced actual personalities. The grammar is good and descriptions are on point.
    Well worth a read.
  • Steve MossRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 4.5
    Only two chapters but off to a great start.
    I confess I have a soft spot for old school fighters. Β It’s nice to have an MC who is a fighter.
  • 0x0FRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 4.5
    Okay I don't do many of these but here we go..
    Style: The author's style is easy to read, but not over simplistic. A different take than most of the LitRPGs with classes not being given out automaticly.
    Grammer: I've seen nothing wrong in from what I've read, but grammer is not my strong point.
    Story: The author does a great job of making the world. I think the fact that the MC got his class from a god was great. Some chaps are little to much world building, but still not bad.
    Character: The MC isn't super OP, he just wants to be like his idol. One of the most human MCs I've read on this site, with the MC's worries and dreams
    Overall: Great story, only problem would be the "slow" releases.
  • hsteinvallRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 4.0
    The story find a good spot, and just as you think 'I look forward to learn what will happen', then the author just timeskip past what ought to be the meat of the book. The timeskip puts the reader back in the story like a single day before it ends. It really puts a negative dent in the story.
  • Steven 'Bull' RatkovichRoyal Road
    β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… 4.0
    Solid start. Decent writing and grammar which always helps.Β  Interested to see where this goes