Godforsaken
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
In a land ruled by powerful beasts, the various human races hide in 7 fortified bastions, protected by the few that have managed to ascend to godhood.
When Arryn's magic manifests wrong, and he gains control over a concept instead of an element; he is forced to leave his bastion home and seek out the hidden vale of the wizards. Only the wizards have mastered the power of the concepts, and most believe magicians like him are better off dead.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Wings of Icarus
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 50
- Views
- 4,336
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- nrsearcyRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0As the title suggests, the story is in its early stages, but it's good so far.
Overall Score:
As said above, we're dealing with a story that's only in its third chapter. So, there's a lot of room to grow. As such, I'll adjust my score accordingly as I read. All of that said, I've enjoyed what I've read so far, and I'm eager to see what else is on offer. The style is engaging, the grammar is solid, the story keeps my attention and has me excited for what's to come, and the characters have understandable motivations. Thus, my overall score of five stars.
Style Score:
The style is engaging, and it's kept my attention throughout. That's all one can really ask for, as far as I'm concerned.
Grammar Score:
Outside of a typo here or there, the grammar has been mostly flawless, and the author seems willing to correct any errors when they're pointed out.
Story Score:
The story is in its earliest stages, so it's difficult to judge this category. Yet, I'm eager to see what the author has in store, which is the benchmark of a good story.
Character Score:
The characters' motivations are clear, and the promise of development is present. I'm excited to see how everything comes together.