Ghosts of the Red desert
Self-Published
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Description
The Red desert. It was their home now. There was not many of them left. There would be even less in a month from now.
Especially if they did not manage to chase down the thief.
With lives hanging on a thread Noah and three others have no choice but to head out in the desert.
Based on a dream I had.
- Klingeris
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Enkiari
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 372
Chapters(1 total)
What readers say about Ghosts of the Red desert
“I'm a fan of this particular short story. It has a really nice setup and gets right to the action. It doesn't a good job of building tension and resolving it in a way that was not what I expected. For only being 17 pages the characters come alive with a com…”
Joshua BRoyal Road4.5 / 5
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Community Reviews(1)
- Joshua BRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I'm a fan of this particular short story. It has a really nice setup and gets right to the action. It doesn't a good job of building tension and resolving it in a way that was not what I expected. For only being 17 pages the characters come alive with a complexity that I've seen other authors struggle within 200 pages or more to deliver.
I'm actually a fan of this particular author's style. They have a very engaging voice that flows from emotion to emotion in addition to action to action. Actually I feel like it's one of the more emotionally engaging authors that I've read. I'm a bit of a fan of C. J. Cherryh who's characters and stories can have a similar flow.
I have to admit the minimum 200 word review is kind of silly on a 17 page story, but I guess that's fine.
The grammar and proofreading could use some more work. That said I'm happy to do it. I have no problems reading it two or three more times to find issues and errors. It was that fast and good of a story that it deserves some attention to be more fully polished.
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