Gate Guardian - Song of the Frozen Soul

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Description

Since the beginning of time, the world has been the slaughtering ground of the Eidolons; mysterious beings from a parallel universe that contaminates the mind of the people to commit deadly sins. In an ambitious struggle to put an end to this evil corruption, warriors with extraordinary abilities; the Gate Guardians relentlessly fight these monsters.

One day, Alaric ceases to become a regular high school student - He becomes trapped in the crevice of dimensions and suddenly attacked by an Eidolon. Coming to his rescue just in time is a Gate Guardian named Tiara, his weird new classmate.

So now, he is stuck with this clumsy maiden who swore to protect him from these extradimensional monsters!

A wacky romance between the two will start to unfold!

But unbeknownst to them, a much darker force lurks in the shadows that will lead to Tiara’s brutal murder...

This is a song of love.

This is a song of hope.

This is a song of laughters.

This is a song of tears.

This is the Song of the Frozen Soul.

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Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2018
Author: ArchlordZero

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 186
Views: 454,497

Chapters(333 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

Luffy MonkeyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love this story make sure you keep it up man. I just want more and more.
CRACKGEARRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Literally reminds me of the game Warframe with SAO added onto it plus Konosuba and am I allowed to pick up girls in a dungeon
be honest here, this is one of the few stories where I'm unable to continue reading despite wanting to.
As someone else already said, it's a good story ... But it isn't my style.
There'sjust something failing to retain my interest, to me it's the sense of ... Satisfaction and epicness, I managed to hold on for around thirty chapters before it wore me out.
There's little construcrivc criticism I can offer to you, and the biggest one of it is very subjective.
It's the one I mentioned above, the thing with the feeling of satisfaction and reward. We are thirty chapters in, and out of the blue none of the things I remember induced any real feeling satisfaction or reward.
It might just be your style, the way you planned your story or whatever. I see that you have one hundred forty other chapters, it might have happened further down the road ... But I simply don't have the nerves to follow your story to that point.
If you ever work on a second piece, please be careful with whether you add something that can induce satisfaction or happiness.
Alright, enough about that. It would be rude to just point out the flaws.
That aside, I wanted to praise your character work.
Your characters feel vivid, I like it. You are really skillful at conveying finer details about characters.
All in all, this would be an excellent story for people that can last through the early chapters.
varunbelly123Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
Spoiler: Spoiler
It has a few bad points and maybe a bit too many cliches but it may became good , there is still potential, still that depends on the author so best of luck
BombbastikRoyal Road
★ 1.0
The story it’s self is not bad, it’s just that the MC is such a retard it’s not even entertaining. If I were him, I would have made it a point to; at the very least, slap both the girls (I know they are girls and you aren’t supposed to hit them, sue me) to at least try to knock some fucking sense into both of them, he doesn’t want them to mess with him, and what do they do, mess with him.
then comes the MC, for no apparent reason he is able to be cold and heartless to anyone but her. No fucking reason at all, and it’s aggravating.