For They So Loved The World

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In the world of Meileron, where some people are part of the world, but not bound to it, and others and bound to it but not part of it, love can be a strange thing. The River Shachannon is bound to one place, and their four-armed lover Aniel thinks that should no longer be true.

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Status
Completed
Year
2024

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3.0/ 5.0
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145

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What readers say about For They So Loved The World

  • The blurb gives some context that is not in the story. This is fairly important to the story and the nature of the river is not really understood, and how the setting works is a bit vague. The lack of development and explanation makes the actual text body f…
    RznRoyal Road3.0 / 5

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  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The blurb gives some context that is not in the story. This is fairly important to the story and the nature of the river is not really understood, and how the setting works is a bit vague. The lack of development and explanation makes the actual text body fairly confusing (I do not count the blurb for context as that is a synopsis). The back and forth between the two is a bit awkward, but it works. This seems like an opening scene and does not feel like a complete story, and it does not answer the obvious question of the nature of the river and what will happen with their absence.