Fire Elementals and Fighter Jets - Original
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Warning: This story is bloated and meandering. There isa completed re-writewhich tells almost exactly the same story with a great deal of additional content in almost exactly half the words.
Ingrid's life changes forever one day when the Taisian Air Navy hosts an airshow in her sleepy seaside town. It is there that she sees a foreign princess flying a beautiful machine powered by fire elementals. As a cold war between two empires escalates, Taisia is rapidly expanding its Air Navy for the inevitable proxy war with the nation of Ayaru to the south. It is during this turbulent time that Ingrid joins the Air Navy and meets Vaska, a lonely aeronautical engineer who fears she is cursed.
But the skies and snowfields of Taisia are not the only arena at stake, for the battle quickly spills over into the elemental planes themselves.
Additional Tags: Aviation
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- Sithys
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 99
- Views
- 39,309
Chapters(63 total)
- Chapter 20: Deep Ayaru PortalJul 29, 2023
- Chapter 19: WarbirdsJul 28, 2023
- Prelude: Six Months AgoJul 27, 2023
- Chapter 18: DerelictJul 26, 2023
- Chapter 17: The Elemental Plane of LifeJul 20, 2023
- Chapter 16: Border PortalJul 19, 2023
- Chapter 15: Order of the Ten SkiesJul 18, 2023
- Interlude 1: The Ghost of TaisiaJul 16, 2023
- Chapter 14: Palace of the WindsJul 15, 2023
- Chapter 13: Plane of Wind IncursionJul 14, 2023
- Chapter 12: The FeathersJul 13, 2023
- Chapter 11: Light CrystalJul 12, 2023
- Chapter 10: The CiviliansJul 11, 2023
- Chapter 9: The CaptainJul 11, 2023
- Chapter 8: Dogfight in the Plane of WindJul 10, 2023
- Chapter 7: The PortalJul 9, 2023
- Chapter 6: SacrificesJul 8, 2023
- Chapter 5: The FighterJul 7, 2023
- Chapter 4: VaskaJul 6, 2023
- Chapter 3: Flying LessonJul 6, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- TheAngryJerkRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The first 10 chapters were all over the place, chapter 11 onwards the story gets a lot more coherent. The pacing needs adjusting so it flows between chapters. Plenty of interesting ideas going but they need space to breathe.
Right now it just isn’t hooking me in, the stakes are neither here nor there.