Fire Elementals and Fighter Jets - Original
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Warning: This story is bloated and meandering. There isa completed re-writewhich tells almost exactly the same story with a great deal of additional content in almost exactly half the words.
Ingrid's life changes forever one day when the Taisian Air Navy hosts an airshow in her sleepy seaside town. It is there that she sees a foreign princess flying a beautiful machine powered by fire elementals. As a cold war between two empires escalates, Taisia is rapidly expanding its Air Navy for the inevitable proxy war with the nation of Ayaru to the south. It is during this turbulent time that Ingrid joins the Air Navy and meets Vaska, a lonely aeronautical engineer who fears she is cursed.
But the skies and snowfields of Taisia are not the only arena at stake, for the battle quickly spills over into the elemental planes themselves.
Additional Tags: Aviation
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- Sithys
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 99
- Views
- 39,309
Chapters(63 total)
- Chapter 37: ContemplationsAug 20, 2023
- Chapter 36: Black SiteAug 19, 2023
- Interlude 2: Airshow in the Plane of DarknessAug 19, 2023
- Chapter 35: Seven GoddessesAug 19, 2023
- Chapter 34: Dogfight in the Plane of LightningAug 18, 2023
- Chapter 33: Imperial Planes Defense ForceAug 15, 2023
- Chapter 32: Wick CityAug 13, 2023
- Chapter 31: The Elemental Plane of LightningAug 12, 2023
- Chapter 30: Devil's DanceAug 9, 2023
- Chapter 29: Daughter of Light and Queen of DarknessAug 9, 2023
- Chapter 28: FirstbornAug 7, 2023
- Broadsheet 1: Jelka DailyAug 7, 2023
- Chapter 27: Dogfight in the Plane of MetalAug 7, 2023
- Chapter 26: Inverted PyramidAug 5, 2023
- Chapter 25: The Elemental Plane of MetalAug 3, 2023
- Chapter 24: Enemy TechnologyAug 2, 2023
- Chapter 23: Family BusinessAug 1, 2023
- Prelude: Ten Hours AgoJul 31, 2023
- Chapter 22: ReeseJul 30, 2023
- Chapter 21: The Elemental Plane of WaterJul 30, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- TheAngryJerkRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The first 10 chapters were all over the place, chapter 11 onwards the story gets a lot more coherent. The pacing needs adjusting so it flows between chapters. Plenty of interesting ideas going but they need space to breathe.
Right now it just isn’t hooking me in, the stakes are neither here nor there.