Existara: the RRD. Book two

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Mission Impossible status: Failed. The Castle of Despair has proven itself to be nothing but an unparalleled overwhelming power yet again.If we fight - we die. If we don't - we die.Will this accursed cycle never end? Is there really no other way? The Rebirth Research Division - is tasked to finding the answers...

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Status
Completed
Year
2021
Author
Jazz Haze

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3.8/ 5.0
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8,208

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • de2jessRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I'm new reader so cant say technical stuff but i like the story . Like your writing style ...seems fresh . There are not alot of editing errors so it gives the impression that author is hard working. This chapter was quite nice and i hooe the upcoming ones will we more and more interesting. Keep up the good work.
    All the best 😁😁
  • BerengariusRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Somewhat enjoyable story from start to end. It didn't help that I read it all within a day. Perhaps, that's what made me enjoy the start of the story more than the end. Noticed only 1 or 2 grammar errors throughout the story. Compared to the first book, this one was more of a slice of life with 99% dialogue with slower pace and more time skips. Slice of lifes takes more to keep me enaged while reading and this one did relatively well but, I prefer the first book.
    The dialogue helped flesh out characters and show their personalility. It was realistic and conversational that kept me engaged most of the time, some could had been cut out. Some characters had similiarities with each other but they were mostly unique with their own troubles. Characters were consistent throughout the story with some character growth that felt logical. Side characters were more fleshed out from first book and became prominent. However, I didn't like the koala kid.
    Worldbuilding still felt lacking but there was a little more built up from first book. There were a lot of POV switches that I felt weren't necessary that made the flow confusing at times. I had to reread and look over to figure out whose POV it was. Sometimes characters were called by their class, title, etc. to avoid repetition or help show whose POV it was but I found it annoying at times.
    Looking forward to the next one.