Dragonsbliss
Self-Published
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Description
Flash fiction about dragons written as an exercise.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Fay Voss
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 699
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Flash fiction is a tricky subject, but this does capture a mood to some degree. The main issue is that it falls for a lot of flowery descriptions that are cliche to convey that. The problem here is that it flips back and forth in description of scenery that whizzes past while describing (likely) draconic courtship rituals. It would be better to focus on the environment and not pull away or intrude with the scenery unless absolutely necessary. This was good, but it kept breaking the energy it was trying to build up.