Draconic Karma Dungeon

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Description

A sapient Dungeon Core appears in a world overseen by a divine System and its slumbering god. The god had originally created Dungeon Cores with the intent of having them rid the world of evil while empowering good people by aiding them in fast leveling. But Dungeon Cores aren’t as effective when controlled by algorithms and randomness as they could be if controlled by a conscious mind.

Determined to follow the divine Mission to rid the world of evil while helping good people, the only sapient Dungeon Core in the world will use the power of dragons and karma to better the world! Even if it means having to go up against slavery, speciesism, and mind control.

Story is completed and has been put up on Amazon Kindle:Draconic Karma Dungeon

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2021
Author: Luna BigCat

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 3,258
Views: 451,457

Chapters(20 total)

What readers say about Draconic Karma Dungeon

“Great story. I am waiting impatiently on every new chapter. At the moment, it is one of only two storys, where i am reading new chapters immediately. I hope, the conclusion of the the unveiling of the ex-beastkin-slaves is as good as i am imagining it. Nice…”
KasinghRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“This is a fun, well written dungeon core story. It's an easy read with an interesting protagonist. If you're looking for a dungeon out to kill people, this story is definitely not for you. Instead, the dungeon is following the dictates of the god who made t…”
LilleneRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

KasinghRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great story.
I am waiting impatiently on every new chapter. At the moment, it is one of only two storys, where i am reading new chapters immediately.
I hope, the conclusion of the the unveiling of the ex-beastkin-slaves is as good as i am imagining it.
Nice would also be a little bigger part about the ex slave of the priest. About her life after getting freedom ans perhaps her first dive.
LilleneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a fun, well written dungeon core story. It's an easy read with an interesting protagonist.
If you're looking for a dungeon out to kill people, this story is definitely not for you. Instead, the dungeon is following the dictates of the god who made the world: kill the evil, help the good.
Some of the characters are as much caricature as character, which is appropriate for a morality tale, but at the same time there are both situations (can we say mind control?) and characters (is it really a bad thing to want to control all of the kill-happy resource-creators?) which are more complex. Some of the answers are in the end obvious, once everything is known, but the dungeon core still has to work through the process to get there.
XblasterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very good story based on Karma for it's dungeon MC, good characters and interesting plot.
Only complaint would be the lack of chaptster! But seriously though I don't really have much to say against the story. Well there is the lack of actual description of fighting as it's more *X shot Y* but that's fine I don't expect every author to enjoy or be great at describing the actual fighting.
nib111Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i have loved dungeon core storys for years and this one is good in that the core has a job its not just a murder hole and the job is something it can work with and be creative with not just exist to do ( clean mana, be a challenge or threat to xyz). thank you for your work.
some thing i suggest to writers as a rule of thum is read it out loud or have some one or tts (text to speak)( google reader view some times there is a tts bult in) do it. if it dose not sound like something some one would say or you get dropped out of the story with confusion look it over. hope this is helpful is some way.
MrWinterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is a breath of fresh air with just how plagued RR is with murderhobo and edgy antihero stories making finding something interesting so difficult. Thank you for writing this fun take on an already fun genre, an especially for finding a way to write a non-human MC that doesn't immediately turn into a human murdering monster for the "grind".
gureitoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
love the writing style and quite enjoyed the journey so far.
of particular interest to me has been the --so far?-- relative lighter focus on the dungeon by itself, compared to the people that interact with it. i want to see what the surrounding cast will become, and the changes they will bring to the world.
mimic12455Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I've spent most of the months reading this story on and off. I can certainly say that it is a good Dungeon Core story to read. It was a long yet fun experience to see everything happen. I won't spoil what happens in the story, but I'd say having more dungeons like this would be a nice change of pace. I await the next book coming.
FlamebeardRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Draconic Karma Dungeon is a dungeon story that starts off with a fair amount of suspended disbelief but quickly moves on to the meat and potatoes of these kinds of stories. The primary gimick is that this dungeon is objectively 'good' as it is given a quest by [The World] to make [The World] a better place.
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Anyway, This quest is facilitated by the fact that the dungeon quickly becomes able to expand and gain experience through peaceful methods.
This is actually a really awesome part of the story. The Dungeon does not come off as weak, stupid, or suboptimal. Rather the author manages to elicit feeling of satification by the simple act of helping the good guys. This is no doubt assisted by the expediant inclusion of a scene where the dungeon inflicts the wrath of god onto the bad guys.
So far the pacing is excellent.
Moving on, the grammer is a solid good enough out of ten. You will definetely find errors (especially in the later chapters) but they are the type of one word typos that are easy enough to gloss over/understand what actually was meant.
The characters come off as relatively one dimensional. However do keep in mind that this world contains *ahem* a one dimensional karma system. Also, there are only 13 chapters. Take it as you will.
The style is average in a good way. It is simple, inoffensive, but still manages to deliver the story across to the reader. The author tends towards simple language, with few literary devices to carry the story. The story has a positive outlook, with an emphasis on the happy interactions between the dungeon and the delvers. Where the story does turn dark, the scenes are quick and brutal, which helps to sell the skill of the dungeon in completeing its primary quest.
This story does not merit the honor of the 'Idiot MC' tag.
Overall it is a simple black and white world with an interesting enough [System] that made me smile. I am excited to see where it will go.
ElmoBRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Excellent story, a real breath of fresh air in my opinion, for the dungeon core genre. Definitely give this a go It's worth the time. I'll be keeping up with the story and really looking forward to every chapter. for some reason i can't post the review but I do enjoy the story
Dilbert56Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
All around a solid story, author kept the pace pretty well so that's a plus, I liked the charecters, and it was all a pretty interesting story. The world building was pretty good, and I'm hoping that the author expands on it a even more in the next book, it's all pretty original and neat stuff. There were some good twists, and one REALLY good twist in the story. My *only* gripe was that i feel the ending was a little lackluster. The ending WAS good though, dont get me wrong. Another thing that made me personally like thenstory was that the author used a mux of creative and new monsters they cane up with themselves, aling with mythological monsters that fit the story, big bonus points in my book for that. I can't wait untill they make the next story in the series. Always been a fan of dungeon core stories and this is 100% one of the better ones I've read, like top 5. Highly reccomended