Double Trouble

Self-Published

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Description

Stanley moved to Bleakburn, hoping to start life over, when strange occurrences keep happening around him. Each day, people grow more disheartened and depressed. Each month, someone jumps off the same apartment complex building, that he could afford. Police are scrambling off different cases, unsure of how to handle them.On top of that, a strange new face appears in his new workplace, one who's taken on Stanley's appearance. His name was Jordan, and besides his name, the only difference between him and Stanley were his eye color and personality. Having a hunch that Jordan is the cause of the occurrences happening around town, Stanley tries to get to the bottom of things. Can he pull it off without digging too deep and losing his sanity?

(Just a heads up in advance, this is a pretty slow-paced story, so it'll take a while for the main plot(s) to get going)

Chapters(80 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • EWilanORoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Interesting premise. I will see.
    The pacing is good.
    I have yet to notice any problems with grammar.
    It's too early to rate the character.
    A suggestion. If you use rank abbreviations, write out the full rank for at least for the first mention. Abreviations in prose always feel jarring to me.
    Keep up the good work.
  • KrymsondaggerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Like the story so far. Characters are likable and interesting. Like the MC's class that I haven't seen before. Hope the story keeps going and stays fun. The story so far has a lot of room for growth. Keep up the good work!
    P.S. Here are a few words to get to 50, lol