Dismantle Them All [Mystery & Progression Fantasy]

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Description

Readers can expectfantasy, mystery, psychology, skill and rank progression, and lots of adventure into the realms of supernatural cybercrime. The story will be very long though, so I hope you stay in for the ride!

"I'm going to dismantle them all!"

In a world where the unseen powers of deities and demons intertwine with the digital age, Eren Fischer embarks on a mission to fight evil after his family falls victim to a devastating scam.

Gifted with supernatural abilities to sense detection, feel negativity, discern truth, locate bad guys, and a whole sleuth of anti-scam abilities as he grows, Eren, alongside allies each bearing their own divine gifts, navigates a world of digital and physical deceit.

They confront deceit in the form of earthly scammers to darker forces seeking to manipulate humanity, from the depths of the digital underworld to the cosmic balance between good and evil.

This story has progression and ranking levels. The ranking levels don't appear in the early chapters, so do take your time to slowly digest and enjoy.

Unfortunately, this story won't have stats as I don't like stats systems. I like to infer power levels.

Updated few times a week, at random times!

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: DestinyDOG

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 47
Views: 7,657

Chapters(18 total)

What readers say about Dismantle Them All [Mystery & Progression Fantasy]

“Overall: I think Dismantle Them All is an interesting supernatural mystery that tells the story of a young man's introduction to a supernatural world well. I particularly like that the supernatural aspects of the world are slowly laid out for Eren and the r…”
Abraham-DeWittRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“The story begins with a very powerful and relatable scene about cybercrime, and how it impacted the main characters' lives. But unlike reality where it stops there, the author expanded on the idea of what could have happened if people actually stood up to r…”
ImpendingChaosRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(5)

Abraham-DeWittRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall: I think Dismantle Them All is an interesting supernatural mystery that tells the story of a young man's introduction to a supernatural world well. I particularly like that the supernatural aspects of the world are slowly laid out for Eren and the reader.
Style: I really like the author's writing style. The story is written well, and there is a good amount of weight put on the descriptions of the events and the dialogue between the characters. I like how much of the story is shown rather than told, and the author doesn't reveal all of the information about the world immediately. Though, I do wish that there was a hint as to the supernatural nature of the world a bit earlier.
Grammar: There were no grammatical or spelling errors as far as I could see.
Story: The story is good. The events of the main character's family running into trouble and Eren's subsequent attempts to track down the people that harmed them are laid out well. One small criticism I have is that I felt like the meeting between Eren and Mia was a bit rushed. It's a bit unorthodox for the main character to make the first move to interact with the guide character.
Character: The characters are probably the strongest part of this story. Every character has a strong and distinct personality. After reading a few chapters, I understand most of the characters' motivations and find them believable. I really understand how the main character's experience with scammers caused him to want to put a stop to them.
ImpendingChaosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story begins with a very powerful and relatable scene about cybercrime, and how it impacted the main characters' lives. But unlike reality where it stops there, the author expanded on the idea of what could have happened if people actually stood up to retaliate. It builts up on the fantasy of actual people who would have wanted these cyber criminals to be caught.
The characters introduced have substances and they each tell a tale that relives a segment of people's past. The dialogues introduce thought-provoking statements without over-providing on too much information, leaving room for readers to ponder about the actual situation.
The author writes in a way that leaves you wanting for more, without placing you on a cliffhanger.
Overall, a good blend of elements from cybercrime, supernatural, fantasy. It shows what could be done in seemingly bad situations, where skills, talent, abit of luck, and most importantly, sheer grit can get a person to.
Lots of potential in this novel, am following it.
StufRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The author's masterful storytelling drew me in from the first page to the last. The characters were complex and relatable, and the plot was both suspenseful and thought provoking. This novel is a must read for fans of literary fiction and anyone looking for a book that will stay with them long after they finish reading it.
MrNobodyisHome (E. Anderson)Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
That Nigerian prince who emailed you to send some money better watch out; the Guardians of Truth are tracking him down right now.
Style
The author's prose is pretty damn solid. They have a way of stringing sentences together that makes the read smooth and immersive. The descriptions pack a punch, and I always enjoy the introspective narration here and there. One thing that I did notice and bothered me a bit was the sudden head-hopping, which can be fine, but it caught me off guard.
Grammar
The author's grammar game is strong. No errors were detected here. Almost makes you think a pro editor combed through this.
Story
I'm not going to lie, I think the story is the strongest aspect. Eren's family has fallen victim to a cruel scam that sends them into ruin. The slow deconstruction of their hope in the opening scenes is really gripping. It hooked me very early on, and I was even more interested when I realized that this was going to be a story of digital vigilantes getting justice with a touch of the paranormal sprinkled in! However, I have to remove some points with how certain sudden developments came about. The supernatural aspect, although cool and interesting, came out of nowhere, and the way the Mia character reveals the power the MC possesses was done rather poorly and abruptly, in my opinion.
Nonetheless, the author gradually unearths more about this world, keeping the mystery alive, which prompted me to keep reading to learn all about it!
Characters
They are okay. The motivations are clear, but a lot is left up to a mystery that makes you want to keep reading to learn more. Their personalities aren't too distinctive from each other yet.
It's got the mystery, the action, and a good cast. Stamp of approval from this Nobody.
SKNit3Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I just started reading the story and I wouldn't say I have gone too far but the story is interesting. I like how the author combines the supernatural and cybercrime together... Eren's power is also truly amazing. The story has an excellent start too and I can see this story's potential. All the characters have depth and there are no flat characters too. The grammar is also top notch. Still, I feel like some parts of the passage should be made simpler to understand.
It is an interesting story. Keep up the good work.