Dawn among spirals

Self-Published

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Description

Alan wakes up with memory loss. As time passes, he realises that he is on a mysterious island, but he doesn't remember how he got there. Disoriented, he tries to find answers to all his questions, while trying to survive in a hostile environment.Complete book on Amazon:Dawn among spirals

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Status
Completed
Year
2024
Author
drN

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ACTIONADVENTURESHORT STORYMYSTERYTIME LOOP

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Rating
2.5/ 5.0
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5
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196

Chapters(1 total)

What readers say about Dawn among spirals

  • “This is a stub of a short story. My first issue was the first person perspective that addresses the reader with "You" and shattering the established POV in the same paragraph. It does this twice in a short chapter. The mystery is intriguing and there are is…”
    RznRoyal Road2.5 / 5

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  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    This is a stub of a short story. My first issue was the first person perspective that addresses the reader with "You" and shattering the established POV in the same paragraph. It does this twice in a short chapter. The mystery is intriguing and there are issues with the prose including typos and awkward expressions throughout. The stumbles are frequent enough that it becomes a problem for me.

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