Dawn
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Disclaimer:First attempt at writing and it's a couple years old (as of 2018). Tried too much but hey if you feel like checking it out, do so.
The world is at war. The clash between the great Saudi Empire and the Brazilian Alliance is reaching its climax. As the bombs fall signifying the end, many people find themselves in an unknown environment. Confused, naked and unarmed the newcomers are attacked by vicious beasts and must work together to survive in this new unknown world. Note: Short chapters. There are only small elements from VR/RPGs, the focus is definitely on the world and characters and not stats / grinding.
Information
- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Rhaegar
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 19
- Views
- 27,691
Chapters(17 total)
- Chapter 16Oct 19, 2015
- Chapter 15Oct 18, 2015
- Chapter 14Oct 18, 2015
- Chapter 13Oct 17, 2015
- Chapter 12Oct 17, 2015
- Chapter 11Oct 17, 2015
- Chapter 10Oct 16, 2015
- Chapter 9Oct 16, 2015
- Chapter 8Oct 15, 2015
- Chapter 7Oct 14, 2015
- Chapter 6Oct 14, 2015
- Chapter 5Oct 14, 2015
- Chapter 4Oct 12, 2015
- Chapter 3Oct 11, 2015
- Chapter 2Oct 10, 2015
- Chapter 1Oct 9, 2015
- PrologueOct 9, 2015
Reviews
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Community Reviews(2)
- TriangleKayes08Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0My rating is subject to change, but this is a darn good story. The mechanics work pretty well so far and the story seems fairly decent for a freeflowing plot. The characters are decently in depth with only minor contradictions (which, let's face it, are necessary to make villains, well, villains). The style is nice and, although the multiple POVs can be a little disconcerting (mostly due to the length of the chapters) at this point, it is safe to say this is a pretty engaging read. Fight scenes are decent--not pokemon battles--the only thing that the story needs is just a tiny bit of foreshadowing in the edges of the background--some characters come from literally nowhere.
This is good.
Chapter 0-13 - MK bk-201Royal Road★★★★ 4.0Eh, not bad as a first story, it was an interesting first couple of chapters but the changing of characters all the time quickly got old and could not figure out when characters repeteaded except the archer and the berserker girl, overall it was a nice enough read, and you can see its potential as his heavy archer, berserk and the shadow summoner themes where clearly used in his other works after this.
Style: the status windows where horrendous, an Excel page would probably have done the trick, it looked so wrong the way it was.
Grammar: overall okay, but some words where lumped together with the next one or did not make sense also idk why he (or she idk) kept writing safe as save.
Story: the story was interesting on the first half but the changing of characters quickly made it lose continuity.
Characters: where okayish but with little time for each one it was hard to get into them.
I would say to give it a read if you enjoyed Rhaegar other works as it has good ideas and its cool to see how they were properly used in his later stories, worth the read at least.