Crimson Visage
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Crim and Katie had hoped The Ruins held the answers they were searching for. Why am I here? Where did they go? Unfortunately, the ruined city had more in store for them. It grasped at the strings of fate and entangled them both in an adventure a thousand years in the making.
A beastly transformation, lost technology, and an ancient race long since forgotten. A post-apocalyptic sci-fi story about two strangers working together to uncover the mystery of The Old Ones.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Vincent The Mage
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 114
- Views
- 29,358
Chapters(43 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- SiliconWolfRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Decent story.
The bad:
The attack on the village makes the villagers sound dumb.
The military, especially the commander, comes across as stupid, evil, and obstructive.
The good:
Grammar and spelling are very good.
Plot and worldbuilding are solid.
The main lead male and the main lead female are interesting enough to keep my attention.
The weird:
This story was on RR earlier. At least I think I read it on RR. It only had maybe 10 chapters at the time. In any case, it's odd that the old version was removed instead of just labeled as a previous version. To anyone who is wondering, the story is, from what I can remember, literally word-for-word except that the female came from a spaceship instead of a different part of the same planet. I'm mentioning that this is weird because having her change to space traveler didn't affect the story at all, good or bad.