Clarent Saga: Chronicles

Based on my work on Saga of the Jewels, I have been hired by an indie game developer to write the novel for their 'novel + turn-based battles' game on Steam.

Of course, a 'novel + turn based battles' is a terrible idea for a game, which is why no other games like this exist, but hey, the developer is paying me.

And if something's worth doing at all, it's worth doing as well as possible, so I am going to give this project my very best shot and try to make it as good as it can be.

So if you read this, please give me feedback on the story to help me make it as good as it can be!

Please note, for this story I have been given a pre-existent set of characters, character back-story sketches and a rough plot to work with. I also have to insert random battles into the narrative, have set characters appear in a certain order, and have the party fight fixed bosses in a certain order, all at fixed points!

Please also note that this is a first draft.I will be editing and re-working this in the future and re-posting it. But I need helpful feedback, if anyone can give it.

You can also find the game version of this on Steam by searching there for 'Clarent Saga: Chronicles'.