Checkpoint
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
What could go wrong for a bunch of jarheads manning thier post outside a small town in the desert?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Author Rowland
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Pickle HurlantRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Time Loop is an interesting genre, and I'm glad I discovered thsi story to start it.
Checkpoint is an easy to read novel, with very short chapters pushing you onwards. The prose is as simple as effective. The start is also quite intriguing, as the world unfolds. By its nature, the MC is a wild card, and nothing appears to be predictable.
I enjoyed the first chapters - BullerRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0the most obvious flaw this story suffers from would be the lack of proper grammar. it has an Habit of making random words capitalized for no clear reason. Some words which are meant to be capitalized also just don't have it sometimes which is a bit weird. Really draws the reader out of the experience and the lack of consistency makes skim-reading pretty hard.
4/5. More work is needed before that rating can increase. It has potential but the grammar and style brings it down.