Cerise

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

In the grim darkness of the far future, games workshop can't stop me from writing fanfiction

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Warsmith Garrett

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADDRAMASCI-FISUPERNATURALSLICE OF LIFEHORRORSHORT STORYPOST APOCALYPTICLOW FANTASYREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYSOFT SCI-FIPROGRESSIONDYSTOPIAARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCEDUNGEON CRAWLERHARD SCI-FI

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.8/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
686

Chapters(53 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • fruancjhRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I’ve read it in its entirety and by god I wish that there was more of it. Such a cozy comfortable read. Thanks for sharing it with us.
    Will probably re-read at some point when I need something easy and comfortable.
    I wish that this website didn’t have a fifty word minimum for writing a review because if they didn’t then I would write more reviews.
  • I Love BS Wise CharactersRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Again and again we see a story of the lone hero that sometimes shops at mentormart when convenient.
    it's wonderful to see another story that builds on blood and found family and although the hero is outrageously overpowered it's a comfy read.
    Looking forward to the hero collecting titles like a "Tales of" character
    A++ sad I'm caught up.
  • IxtaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I'm really loving this story so far.  The world building and the character building have both been fantastic so far.  There's a great balance to how much information is doled out at once and it's fulfilling my current story needs while leaving my interest peaked to find out more later.  I'm especially interested to find out how system's semi-enforced Noblesse Oblige affects nobles and their convenants with the lower class people.  I'm also interested to see where the reincarnation angle goes in this story.  In most stories, the reincarnated personality completely overwhelms the original personality and memories of the current body, but that is definitely not the case here.  Quite the opposite, in fact.  Cerise is still a young girl with a lot to learn about the world, and just a few fragments of knowledge and maturity to help her along.  The interactions with her family and friend are lovely, though I must say, I have some suspicions about Mykhal...
  • WayneGryphonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I feel that this has a good start for an epic tale, the story setting doesn't do the info dump that many do, there isn't a big focus on the 'past life' or the fact that the girl is an insert, there is enough information to peace together things that shaped the soul and influence the new incarnation to be somewhat real and I like the Class and religious influence native to that world.
  • Zoro50Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This has been a nice easy story to read.  Seeing Mykal and Cerise grow from a couple kids to capable young adults has been an excellent read.  The pace of the story is great.  Even though exciting things are happening, there is always a knowledge that things are going to work out.  Nice isekai slice of life.  Recommended for the days you need to decompress!
  • aperson2575Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like it. But it does feel a little fast paced at times and doesn't allow enough time for the progress to settle in before another big event happens. Which snowballs into the next.
    A bit more time and filler between those bigger plot points would help things feel a little more natural and not so overpowered and overly rushed.
    For instance, the change/growth in character from village girl to ambassador/diplomat doesn't feel like it has had enough word count to put that change into perspective.
    Also, i feel like the story could benefit from some of those breaks and extensions being from other perspectives, particularly Bergin and Rhene, to flesh out the change in their daughter as her past life's memories and her new experiences changes her.
  • SigfreidRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like it a lot and am enjoying the balance between character growth, story and world building. The characters are written fairly agree appropriate with real struggles that they are learning to overcome. I struggle to understand The Cyr motivations but hopefully they get explained in future. Great start looking forward to more in the future!
  • Rex de xeraRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It's a hidden gem you will love it and carving for more chapters
    But alas it's like Tabitha moore from Trailer trash author kun loves his long vacation and am still looking for his return like a love struck child
    Ok so that's it I highly recommend this story if you want check my profile there is lot of good stories I saved i hope it's 50 words long
    Edit :it's been 4 months, author is it dropped? at least send one chapter
    Edit: the author last opened royal road on November 26/2024 I hope he is ok, check his profile
  • ClayaxeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I have very little in the way of things I can say negative of this story. Its light on RPG elements and lowkey isekai with out being on out right, well written and enjoyable story. My only real complaint is the once a week update schedule.
    additonal words to reach 50 words.
  • RocksNPebblesRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The writing is clear and of good quality. The story is slow paced and covers day to day events and progress. The isekaj elements are unclear on purpose and it is a fantasy native who has awakened some memories of earth life, so not a full isekaj. So far it seems to have made very little difference,  but might do later. If there was no isekai aspect,so far it wouldn't make any difference at all aside from a couple minor skill uses and inner thoughts.
    The power sets and system are interesting, but quite unclear how they impact the real world. Skill levels keep going up, but it all seems to reflect and record what they can already do. When a skill goes up it seems to offer zero advantage. Does she use less mana or stamina with a higher skill level because of the skill, not really or not explained. It just seems like she learned to be more efficient in using the skill on her own. While the litrpg and system are super prominent...they don't seem to matter at all, which is an issue.  Including at least 2 or 3 clear benefits would be better.
    Finally classes...there is a nobility and contract system with social status in the system profile as peasantry or freeman or nobles. This is problematic  as it means the system endorses feudalism. This is somewhat explored, but mostly in defence of such a system. Her earth thoughts and memories don't seem to object to this and the MC makes an impassioned speech supporting such a system. This seems odd.