Description

This story is a work of fanfiction and is not cannon to the Chrysalis book series.

This story is a reboot of my previous work: The Mother of Drakes.

Meet Aria, a plucky young drake who's just been dropped face first into the world of Pangera. Surrounded on all sides by monsters, hunters and soldiers—oh my!—she'll have carve her own path through the dungeon and create her a safe haven for herself and her allies, through any means possible. Get ready to explore Aria's story in this action packed, fantasy dungeon crawler!

What readers say about Broodmother: A Chrysalis Story

“I love this story and I think the monster form of Aria is really interesting. I can't wait to see what she evolves too. I really enjoy your story and I hope you continue to.develop it in the future. I generally like evolution themes stuff so learning about…”

NiiiiiiiiickRoyal Road5.0 / 5

“The writing so far has been clear and fluid with only a few grammar errors scattered throughout. The main character and their personality are interesting and personable enough to be a solid fan story/solo story especially when combined with the strong worlb…”

LyarzaRoyal Road4.5 / 5

Community Reviews(3)

NiiiiiiiiickRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

I love this story and I think the monster form of Aria is really interesting. I can't wait to see what she evolves too. I really enjoy your story and I hope you continue to.develop it in the future. I generally like evolution themes stuff so learning about new monsters in the chrysalis world is a fun time.

LyarzaRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

The writing so far has been clear and fluid with only a few grammar errors scattered throughout. The main character and their personality are interesting and personable enough to be a solid fan story/solo story especially when combined with the strong worlbuilding from chrysalis. There is alot of time between releases but based on real life issues and this being a hobby it is reasonable that there will be large gaps in uploading.

SoftDragonRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

I may come back and expand this with a full review later, when the story and characters are actually things that exist.
So far it looks like bog standard monster evolution isekai dungeon litRPG (i am not familiar with the setting or what twists to expect from that), but the writing seems decent, grammar is clean. There are a few incredibly bizarre typos (jungle Jim - capitalized!) that look like the result of dictation software, but the author is clearly literate and making an effort. The prose is decent, nothing to praise or recoil from.
There are not really characters yet; the protagonist is alone and still vaguely defined, and may not be entirely mentally collected at this point. So far, there is a chapter opening hinting at outside events that imply the scope of the story and size of the cast will increase with time.