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When Calvin finds a knife walking home he is engrossed with its tempting powers and learns of its means of bringing back a loved one—at the cost of killing a human. He kills his brother, Nathan, in order to ressurrect his life’s love, Yui. However, complications arise when his brother rises from the grave as a flesh-eating monster bent on gaining untold power. And what’s worse is Yui seems to have memories of when she was dead—a mystery that could have bigger implications than humanity could understand.

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Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

Reading this story has made me question a few things about the writing process behind it. Was it written by an AI? Was it machine translated from another language?
The grammar is rough to say the least, and the narrative isn’t straightforward enough (due to a poor integration of flashbacks). I also think that the chosen 3rd person omniscient narrator is not the best pick for this story, as the personalities of the two focal characters are hard to tell apart.
However, despite all that, there is an interesting story below all that. I think with a little bit of polishing, perhaps through Grammarly, this story could become something great.
Style 2
Story 4.5
Grammar 3.5
Character 3

Beyond Death’s Boundary

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