AWE: Adventures of a Reincarnated Noble Android Girl (Rebooted)
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Hmmmmmmmmmm... it's dark and it's really wet. Am I inside something? A stomach? So I'm already dead? That was quick...
Wait, who am I!? Ah! That's right! My name is Derek! Derek... sumtin sumtin. I am a male at 17 years old, a Senior High student. I was enrolled in Science Technology Engineering and Mathematics and a...uhhhhhhhhhhh...
I think, I was studying to be an engineer. I remember drawing up blueprints and enganging in calculus. It must have been a nightmare... I have 2 younger siblings annnnnnd... 2 parents? I guess?
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...I'm very confused. Why can't I remember them? What was the name of the school I went to? I remember my chosen school track, my age, my art skills, and a black, retangular "something". But that's it. I can't even recall my name perfectly.
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Huh?
Is that a light?
Oh shit! I'm panicking! I'm panicking here! I'm not going! I'll never go into the light! Kiss my ass, guy calling out to me from within the light! I know I'm just imagining you, but still, KISS ASS!
I start to move away from the light. And that was when I noticed it.
I can't move.
I really can't move.
I'm desperately trying to get away, but the most I can do is just wiggle! And even worse! The slimy walls are contracting, squeezing me out, closer and closer into the light.
So, that's how you want to play it huh? Well, I ain't passing on, quietly. Get ready to be so annoyed you'd wish you didn't call out for me! Guy in the light!
I screamed from the top of my lungs. VERY ANNOYING SCREAM GOOOOOO!!!
"UuuuuwaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaahhhh!!! Hic. Hic. UwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaa!!!"
A high pitched, crying voice reached my ears once I was wrapped within the light.
"Milady, it's a girl!"
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Eh?
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Real NaN Bread
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- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 156
- Views
- 9,514
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- SitnaRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Neat story with cute mc with a strange fetishes. At least the story isn’t discriminatory towards women liking men, as 99% of stories here are.
- TheRWS96Royal Road★★★★ 4.0The first thing that comes to mind is: slapstick
The second is: what the hell is this
But leaving that aside it is pretty good,
It is different a bit insane and hard to follow sometimes.
(but then again I do not think I am entirely sane as well)
This book is not really my style so I will not continue reading it.
But objectively subjectively speaking, this is quite a good book
And I hope the author will continue because I think people will enjoy this.
My advice so far is to just read a few chapters and you should know whether
you like it or not, but one way or the other have fun o/ - VoidEaterRoyal Road★★★ 3.0STYLE: I hate 1st person POV. No decent author uses 1st Person POV. It's chaotic, hard to follow, and it's plain weird. This could be much better if you use third person POV. Plus, don't let your character break the fourth wall. It's maybe comical but it isn't novel worthy.
STORY: Same Old. Same Old. I could have ignore the fact that this is practically the same plot with half of the webnovel I have read if I enjoyed the story but, alas! I didn't. Sorry.
GRAMMAR: No major grammatical mistakes but the choice of words is so cringe-worthy sometimes.I know that word choice shouldn't be included in grammar but stylistics and grammar goes hand in hand.
CHARACTER: I dunno but I don't like the mc. She's annoying. It may seem cute to you or some readers but it will get old in later parts if she won't change. So I would change my caharcter score if you would add some character growth to the MC.
OVERALL: It's on the decent portion of the novels here in RRL. It's not the worst. However, this is not for anyone. - pewpewcachooRoyal Road★★★ 3.0A little to much for me. While the writing seems good and so the the grammar. The overall story is just not what I thought it might be. While there are some parts that are funny, the story overall just isn't my cup of tea. Keep writing though, every chapter you write helps you improve yourself as a writer.