Assassin's wishes

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Description

Tiny is a successful adult at earth.Due to terrorist attack he died and rebirth as a slave in a different dimension where cultivation exist.Using his experience, he is trying to change his destiny.Be aware, this story is a dark one and it is contains extreme violence and rape, no sexual writing at all.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
orleg

Tags

ADVENTURETRAGEDYSUPERNATURALMALE LEADHORRORMYSTERYREINCARNATIONTIME TRAVEL

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Rating
2.0/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
9,715

Chapters(48 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Sun HashiraRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Well, just mere minutes after my first review, I'm back again.
    You need to wipe the entire series from the website, and only release them again after correcting all mistakes.
    The first two chapters already feel like a draft that's waiting to be edited.
    Grammatical mistakes, Punctuation Errors, mishaps of lowercase letters.
    And a tad bit of more advice.
    Before progressing on the MC, a tad more of worldbuilding won't hurt anyone. I get how you wrote about the relationships between the races and a little bit about the geography of the location, but at 3 years of age (being fully sentient since birth), he could have amassed just a little bit more knowledge than that!
    So I hope you take my advice, not with a grain of salt, but with consideration.