Assassin's wishes
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Tiny is a successful adult at earth.Due to terrorist attack he died and rebirth as a slave in a different dimension where cultivation exist.Using his experience, he is trying to change his destiny.Be aware, this story is a dark one and it is contains extreme violence and rape, no sexual writing at all.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- orleg
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 9,715
Chapters(48 total)
- Cave exploration 1Aug 30, 2022
- Forest ExplorationAug 30, 2022
- Massacre 3Aug 30, 2022
- Massacre 2Aug 30, 2022
- Massacre 1Aug 30, 2022
- First god levelAug 30, 2022
- LoveAug 30, 2022
- War against fateAug 30, 2022
- Life forceAug 30, 2022
- Just a dreamAug 30, 2022
- Aren't we the sameAug 30, 2022
- Fate your worst friendAug 30, 2022
- Live an happy lifeAug 30, 2022
- AbandonenAug 30, 2022
- Innovator 2Aug 30, 2022
- Innovator 1Aug 30, 2022
- The wind before the stormAug 30, 2022
- RestrainedAug 30, 2022
- Poison masterAug 30, 2022
- 9 - GeenomAug 30, 2022
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- Sun HashiraRoyal Road★★ 2.0Well, just mere minutes after my first review, I'm back again.
You need to wipe the entire series from the website, and only release them again after correcting all mistakes.
The first two chapters already feel like a draft that's waiting to be edited.
Grammatical mistakes, Punctuation Errors, mishaps of lowercase letters.
And a tad bit of more advice.
Before progressing on the MC, a tad more of worldbuilding won't hurt anyone. I get how you wrote about the relationships between the races and a little bit about the geography of the location, but at 3 years of age (being fully sentient since birth), he could have amassed just a little bit more knowledge than that!
So I hope you take my advice, not with a grain of salt, but with consideration.