Assassin's wishes
Self-Published
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Description
Tiny is a successful adult at earth.Due to terrorist attack he died and rebirth as a slave in a different dimension where cultivation exist.Using his experience, he is trying to change his destiny.Be aware, this story is a dark one and it is contains extreme violence and rape, no sexual writing at all.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- orleg
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 9,715
Chapters(48 total)
- 48 - Some truthNov 22, 2022
- 47 - Fight like the hero you areNov 15, 2022
- 46 - We need a little bit of orderNov 8, 2022
- 45 - Killing the devil inside of youNov 1, 2022
- 44 - Simple man have a simple planOct 25, 2022
- 43 - The desire to protectOct 18, 2022
- 42 - If you follow a plan, everything will work outOct 11, 2022
- 41 - Training 2Oct 4, 2022
- 40 - training 1Sep 27, 2022
- 39 - It takes a lifetime to surpass one's masterSep 20, 2022
- 38 - A wish never killed anyone 2Sep 13, 2022
- 37 - A wish never killed anyone 1Sep 6, 2022
- The road to hellSep 1, 2022
- Never mess with the wrong motherAug 31, 2022
- Everybody needs a friend or twoAug 31, 2022
- Life worth living 2Aug 31, 2022
- Life worth living 1Aug 30, 2022
- Love beneath the surface 2Aug 30, 2022
- Love beneath the surface 1Aug 30, 2022
- Cave exploration 2Aug 30, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- Sun HashiraRoyal Road★★ 2.0Well, just mere minutes after my first review, I'm back again.
You need to wipe the entire series from the website, and only release them again after correcting all mistakes.
The first two chapters already feel like a draft that's waiting to be edited.
Grammatical mistakes, Punctuation Errors, mishaps of lowercase letters.
And a tad bit of more advice.
Before progressing on the MC, a tad more of worldbuilding won't hurt anyone. I get how you wrote about the relationships between the races and a little bit about the geography of the location, but at 3 years of age (being fully sentient since birth), he could have amassed just a little bit more knowledge than that!
So I hope you take my advice, not with a grain of salt, but with consideration.