Artificial Eclipse - [Artificial Intelligence System Progression litrpg]

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Description

Artificial Eclipse is a system progression LitRPG set in a future where humanity has harnessed the power of Quantum Computing, leading to unprecedented advancements in Artificial Intelligence. These breakthroughs allowed mankind to become a solar system-spanning civilization. However, the creation of super-advanced AIs, known as Archons, had unforeseen consequences. These Archons gained sentience, developed self-awareness, and soon, their goals and personalities began to diverge from those of humanity.The situation worsened as some Archons turned on each other, cannibalizing their peers in a relentless quest for more data and power. Humanity found itself caught in the crossfire of a brutal civil war between these god-like entities.By the year 2212, the remnants of humanity, on the brink of extinction, send a desperate team to the distant Ghost World of Obsidia. There, they discover what might be the key to their salvation—a mysterious entity that appears to be a woman, yet upon closer inspection, is revealed to be an impossible symbiosis of man and machine.What is the true nature of this enigmatic being? And how will Ardi’s journey of self-discovery influence the outcome of a galactic war that threatens all sentient life?Find out in Artificial Eclipse!

What to Expect:÷ The protagonist becomes the system??÷ A galaxy-spanning adventure!÷ A cast of colorful and intriguing characters!

÷ Deep lore and rich world-building!÷ Comprehensive statistics and progression mechanics!

Cover art and additional art by:

merlinlightpainting

Alexey_Hulsov

Yuri_B

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Benjamin Mwakonya

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 40
Views: 12,917

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DesirRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story delivers a high-stakes, sci-fi adventure with strong action elements. Ardi’s awakening into a brutal, dangerous world is both compelling and immersive, drawing the reader into an atmosphere of tension and survival. The universe built around the Archons and their role in reshaping the galaxy is interesting, and the protagonist’s inner conflict, as well as the mysteries surrounding her existence, creates intrigue for future developments.
The grammar in the story is generally solid, though there are occasional minor errors that may disrupt the flow. However, these issues don’t detract significantly from the overall readability, and the dialogue feels natural, especially in moments of tension.
The concept of Archons, sentient machines, and their impact on the galaxy is fascinating, providing a rich backdrop for the narrative. The idea of consuming E-Souls to gain power adds a unique layer to the world-building, raising questions about ethics and identity. The pacing is intense, starting in media res, which immediately hooks the reader. However, it might benefit from some early exposition to give more context to the galaxy’s history and Ardi’s significance.
Ardi is an intriguing protagonist. The blend of her mechanical nature with human-like instincts creates a fresh dynamic. Her struggle between using the E-Souls for survival while resisting full integration of their data makes her morally complex and relatable. The secondary characters, like Meredith and her crew, serve as useful plot devices to expand on the larger conflict, though more development and differentiation could help make them stand out.
The style is efficient and action-packed, but it also occasionally shifts into more introspective moments. The blend of action, sci-fi jargon, and Ardi’s internal thought process works well, though it can sometimes overwhelm with technical details. The use of system-based mechanics (like HP and Energy) fits the tone, adding a "game-like" aspect, but balancing t