Arcane Power
Self-Published
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Description
Mitsuki Asuka (Male), returns home, an isolated island near the Nagasaki peninsula. Living alone is a dream to many youngsters, and so is his, but he doesn't expect to return home to adventure. But that is what he finds, together with spuernatural encounters, monsters and family issues. Not that he is THAT unprepared for it.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Kuromori
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 323
- Views
- 1,556
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(10)
- kay.lensonRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0good plot with bold MC, yup just don't drop it.
P.S. faster updates will be appreciated. - HaruHaruRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5i dont know what should i write i just think this ff is cool and it feel diffrent from other fanfic it have a little grammar mistake and plot so
the story pace and style also good
that the only reviews i can say for now - GeocideRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0the new story is great, but to be honest there are alot of mistakes, although i can understand this i recconmend to reread the story after u post it:) otherwise the new story is great.
- Friickin GRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Make the chapter releases faster and I think I'm in love with the story.
- FallenWindRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5i mean the novel that you wrote isnt bad
it looks like your trying to learn how to speak English lol
the story is pretty good or at least it was sort of good
i didnt know it was setting in japan until all the bullshit with -san or -kun
and the way you describe some of the stuff looks like it was from Japanese culture or comedy it was really confusing until i noticed the was using stuff from japanese - shinx13Royal Road★★★ 3.0Don't listen to what ppl say.
Just do it!!
I don't believe human born genius, without trying there is no result. - VN1560Royal Road★ 0.5To be honest I thought the idea for this novel was pretty good. However the grammar is absolutely terrible. From misplaced words to misspelled words and missing letters is horrendous. A few days after I read this, I read a translated novel on honyakusite.wordpress.com. That novel was ovrmmo. The beginning was exactly the same. From his "trash skills" to a player calling him out for it. In your first novel, the rise of the dragon King, copying Spartan from rrl could be considered a coincidence. However with a second copy, I no longer know what to say. If you are copying the idea, at least mention the fact that you are and tag your story with a fan fiction tag.
- CianSlayaaRoyal Road★ 0.5this's a copy not an attempt to write FF! Link to the original:honyakusite.wordpress.com
- _undexRoyal Road★ 0.5I can smell the magnificent PLOT ARMOR.
2 stars coz’ stats. I didn’t even read it yet but meh.
Kudos!!!!!! You just flip on my grammar-nazi side. 1/2 STAR TO YOUUUUUU!!!!! - sHawkeRoyal Road★ 0.5I haven't read past the second chapter at the time of this review but I stopped because of the childish writing,no I don't mean just the spelling errors, a part is that there is horrid dialogue its like a child trying to talk with a half learned language! There is definitely a good start due to the synopsis but you flubbed it hard on the first sentence IMO. A spilling error I found deal breaking unlikje mixing up you're and your also break and brake I consider minor,but misspelling 'system'?! I see elements from 2 sources that I really like them being Only Sense Online and A Middle Age Man s VRMMO Activity Log with the skill set chosen being practically ripped off of Middle Aged Man VRMMO Activity Log,and the MC being a trap(unoriginal except he's comfortable with it) from OSO...the story doesn't have anything to convince me to continue reading your story. Plus having read the note it seems there is NO effort put into this story at all...