Alexis, the Officer's dark history

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Alexis as she liked to be called instead of her number by the government has been picked to be one of the special to colonize another world in the name of the great experiment.

it will come back to haunt them.

Author's note. This story was written after watching movie Finding Forrester when Sean Connery said 'Don't think just write' hit a cord with me. So I would jot down scenes I would like in a story and then slowly combined them with writing between. It was written mostly between 2010-2013 with 184 different saves. It is not made as a webnovel so the chapters are not setup as such. No editor so there can be some issues.

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2024
Author
Rushvin

Tags

ADVENTUREFEMALE LEADTRAGEDYSCI-FIPSYCHOLOGICALWAR AND MILITARYDYSTOPIAARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCEHARD SCI-FI

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.0/ 5.0
Followers
3
Views
5,649

Chapters(19 total)

What readers say about Alexis, the Officer's dark history

  • “This is a excellent story which the author attacks pretty well, it has some interesting characters and actions taken due to the structures of the society it is set in. It moves along at a decent clip with some great scenes, what is missing is understanding…”
    EmpireofTrustRoyal Road3.0 / 5

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(1)

  • EmpireofTrustRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    This is a excellent story which the author attacks pretty well, it has some interesting characters and actions taken due to the structures of the society it is set in.
    It moves along at a decent clip with some great scenes, what is missing is understanding of too and to amongst other sex confusions with minor spelling issues. Nothing too substantial but jarring enough to detract from a smooth reading experience.
    Next thing I felt might be needed is more colour, not the spectrum but in descriptions to round out what the characters see.
    The clothes are dirty, are they ripped, smelly or greasy, crusty with blood?
    Is there spalling from the weapons discharge, gouging metal from the fittings, the cloying smell of burnt electronics coating the back of her throat?
    This is a great framework of a story and I am looking forward to more episodes.

Similar to Alexis, the Officer's dark history

Readers who enjoyed Alexis, the Officer's dark history often also read these web novels: