A laid back thief

Self-Published

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Description

Marco has turned into being a thief to make helping his mother easier. Little does he know that his grand heist will change the course of his life forever. Watch his journey from being a laid-back thief to someone who will protect everything. Posted only on Neovel.io and here

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Battery_author

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.3/ 5.0
Followers: 3
Views: 2,575

Chapters(12 total)

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NOCLUERoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story of this book in my opinion I like it because it takes inspirations from books, manga, and shows I already like. The cringy stuff like "bobomelon" is new and new is good but in terms of what was happening at that time of that remark it was not "good cringy". The grammar is subpar but for someone who seems new to writing books, i think its at least medium. The character i also kind of like because he is trying to help his mom and i can connect with that but some other people can, I also see lots of potential for character development. The style is also good for someone new to writing books. Therefore i give this book a 3.5 out of 5 the saving grace is the story and style of this book. I hope to see lots of improvement in grammar and growth in character. I will write another review at 10-20 chapters to see the story and improvement in the author's style, grammar and what he chooses to do with this character. I truly beleive that there is potetial within this book and that this author trully has potectial if he keeps trying.