A Demon Within

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Description

Reagan is at the head of the Trusted Steel Company, a mercenary group that has been growing in the last years. At about one hundred men now, they have a decent reputation. As mercenaries, they have been through a lot of dangerous missions, but always won out in the end. Only this last mission they have taken is shadier than usual. What are these priests of Kathar really after out here in the jungle? What is lurking in the ruins before them?

WARNING: Contains Gruesome Scenes/Violence

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Filford

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
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oxygen5011Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
First a few chapters were good then everything went bad. One dimensional characters, unreasonable time skips, unexplained skills...
Shortly, this doesn't feel like a story but a marathon. Mc gains an extremely important skill but we weren't informed anything about its process but only told he got the skill as a result of something.
Pov changes are random, numerous and there is this lack of connection between chapters where pov changes happen. We're told extremely short and unstable chapter about mc then switch to another perspective then switch back to mc again.
This story has potential, it has promising and interesting concept. A rewrite would do wonders to the story.