A Demon Within
Self-Published
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Description
Reagan is at the head of the Trusted Steel Company, a mercenary group that has been growing in the last years. At about one hundred men now, they have a decent reputation. As mercenaries, they have been through a lot of dangerous missions, but always won out in the end. Only this last mission they have taken is shadier than usual. What are these priests of Kathar really after out here in the jungle? What is lurking in the ruins before them?
WARNING: Contains Gruesome Scenes/Violence
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Filford
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 114
- Views
- 25,479
Chapters(37 total)
- Chapter 37: Fight or FlightDec 6, 2022
- Chapter 36: Scouting The HillsDec 4, 2022
- Chapter 35: Soul MagicDec 2, 2022
- Chapter 34: Just A TheoryDec 1, 2022
- Chapter 33: RecruitmentNov 30, 2022
- Chapter 32: LiberationNov 29, 2022
- Chapter 31: Strings AttachedNov 28, 2022
- Chapter 30: True AdventurersNov 27, 2022
- Chapter 29: Whatever It TakesNov 25, 2022
- Chapter 28: What Lurks Deep DownNov 24, 2022
- Chapter 27: A Small RespiteNov 23, 2022
- Chapter 26: A Hated FoeNov 22, 2022
- Chapter 25: Hobs And GobsNov 21, 2022
- Chapter 24: Dungeon DivingNov 20, 2022
- Chapter 23: The Price Of FreedomNov 19, 2022
- Chapter 22: A Dark NightNov 18, 2022
- Chapter 21: HonestyNov 17, 2022
- Chapter 20: The Assassin's GuildNov 16, 2022
- Chapter 19: What It Means To Be Mithril RankNov 16, 2022
- Chapter 18: MonsterNov 15, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- oxygen5011Royal Road★★★ 2.5First a few chapters were good then everything went bad. One dimensional characters, unreasonable time skips, unexplained skills...
Shortly, this doesn't feel like a story but a marathon. Mc gains an extremely important skill but we weren't informed anything about its process but only told he got the skill as a result of something.
Pov changes are random, numerous and there is this lack of connection between chapters where pov changes happen. We're told extremely short and unstable chapter about mc then switch to another perspective then switch back to mc again.
This story has potential, it has promising and interesting concept. A rewrite would do wonders to the story.