A Blank Tale

Self-Published

Description

I only hope to be with him for this life.For he's the one who fills in the blank in my life.Yet, my mind only draws a blank as to who he is.

(NOTE: Story under same author (Fluffypie) on different site with same progress)

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SeraphirateRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Ha, this is an awesome story! I thought it was romance but it has something more to it, this story has potential!
One of the weaknesses I can spot is that it could be hard to explain about the multiple resets MC experienced. Secondly, it has this something interesting left out when it could probably make the story much better, for example how she learned hacking and how she hacked the goverment database, also when she managed to create a tracking device it is unclear how managed to make something so powerful, alone, without a degree or past experiences and in short amount of time, it would be intriguing to read about.
More chapters please!
captainmeta4Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Story takes a little while to get going, but it’s an interesting mystery of a branching decision tree, and the consequences of choice.
Poor tense consistency in earlier chapters. Needs an overhaul for grammar and sentence structure.