21 Days

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"Do you believe in the afterlife ?" she asked.

"No." he replied "I don't".

Kriyank is a firm believer in the mortality of things. He has always believed that all things has its end. END OF STORY. That's exactly how his and Evlyn's relationship also ended after 10th standard. But then after 12th, when Kriyank finds out that Evelyn has got cancer and doesn't have much time to live, he writes her letters everyday till the day she dies. But then suddenly, one fine day after her death he starts receiving letters from someone called Evelyn. Could it be someone else or could it really be her, sending him the letters from a place he never believed to be true.....the AFTERLIFE ? Perhaps it's time for him to open his window to something new.....

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • MikeyTheRaccoonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I swim through these stories of yours Vitaly like a Phantom through the Astral Ocean! I especially love the connection of the detective and our lovely crystalline biker girl! I hope she pops in for a bit at later chapters! And how you interact with your readers? Actually including them in your stories? Muah!
  • PunpopeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Twenty-one Days is a mesmerizing blend of fantasy and suspense. From the moment the doomed mage comes to life from an orphan's sacrifice, the story grips you with its enchanting premise. With foxgirls, rational solutions, and dungeons aplenty, every page turn is a thrilling adventure. A captivating tale where every moment counts
  • daredevil2033Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    An extraordinary web novel that weaves a mesmerizing tale of magic, destiny, and self-discovery. From the very first chapter, the story grips your imagination and refuses to let go, leaving you spellbound with each passing moment.
    At the heart of the novel is a doomed mage, whose origin story is both heart-wrenching and magical. Created from an orphan using a philosopher's stone, his life is granted a mere 21 days to unfold. Despite this ominous time limit, the novel expertly crafts a tale of hope, resilience, and making the most of the time we are given.
    The world-building is simply breathtaking. The author paints a vivid and enchanting landscape, filled with fantastical creatures, hidden realms, and enigmatic magic systems. Every page introduces us to new wonders, inviting us to immerse ourselves completely in this beautifully crafted universe.
  • BlancOfficialRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love Vitaly's Work and seeing the notification ping saying 'Vitaly S Alexius has just released a new fiction' always gives a dopamine rush. The concept of '21 days' is amazing. I can't wait for more chapters to be released, the first three have definetly set high expectations.
    Story Summary :
    Mervinii Polliix, 16 m, an orphan who has been experimented on by the mad mage, Master Alaric Milgrim. He has endured numerous cruel experiments by his master, and now faces an impending death sentence due to the instability of his soul. 21 days, the blue screen tells him, within 21 days he'll be dead.
    With only three weeks left to live, Mervinii embarks on a journey to find a way to prevent his impending demise, escaping the orphanage and venturing out to seek his own salvation.
    Mervinii as a character is amazing, he demonstrates an ability to think on his feet and react to his situation. The small interactions that Merv had at the Apothecary with Mila shows a depth of character development that allot of novels lack. The little attention to detail when designing characters always brings the Vitaly's fictions to life.
    I think it's the attention to detail that embellishes Vitaly's style, this is especially highlighted when we see the character art he designs and we appreciate the multi step process it took to look as great as it does.
    As always, Vitaly's grammar is impeccable. Can't wait to follow Merv's story :3
    Blanco out, this has been an advanced review.
  • Codes247Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It is a little hard to describe what makes this book so interesting other than it is unique. The main character is quite smart thinking of several things I wouldn't have thought of. Most of of the time his ideas works out for him but sometimes his answers to a problem leads to another problem.
    The main unique part of the book is that the main character only has 21 days until he does or fixes his soul. That concept rushes the book and increases the intense slightly. Which to me is in a good.way.
    The characters however are lacking. There is a lot of mystery about their pasts. Some mystery is good but with how much mystery there is the characters seem like a blank slate. It makes it hard to relate to them but it makes it easier to imagine yourself in their situation.
    There is dungeon diving in this story like many other fantasy books. This book so far is focused less on fighting and more on uncovering who the characters are through conquering the dungeon.
    Lastly in summary if you are looking for a comedy, an over the top fighting book, or a deep character backstory book this might not be for you. If you are looking for a book that has a lot of mystery, is good at making you think/ second guess what you thought would happen, has a smart main character, and has very little filler words this might be the right book for you.
  • Isa BayfieldRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Vitaly did it again - out of the debts of his incredibly creative mind he comes up with another captivating plot which draws you in from the first page. A mistreated orphan who escapes a bad guy who condemned him to die in 21 days sets out to escape the cruel fate he had been delt. So, so interesting, can hardly wait to see how this plot unfolds. Very well written, very likeable mc. Magic background very intriguing.
  • MichvallRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Read up to chapter 18.7
    As the title says the world building is amazing. Rules that makes it feel truly magical and some interesting characters made it totally worth it.
    The only thing is that now Im afraid what will happen with the book once the timer is done.
    I will continue for sure. Totally recommended
  • ishnerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The most important thing to note about the story is that the titular time limit is actually limiting. We are only 20 chapters in and three days are already gone. Constraint breeds creativity, and this story promises to be a wild ride. While I do not nessicarily continue at quite this pace, I do not think we will end up stuck with the last few days lasting forever like an anime fight scene.
    Sadly, a little bit is being lost in the rush. Vitaly's usual style of rapidly changing plans and situations is showing a bit more luck reliance than usual, and character development is struggling a little bit.
    That said, I still recomend the story in very strong terms. Just not the highest possible recommendation.
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    There are two interesting anomolies here.
    First, we seem to share geography with Instilation Rosalene, but the system is wildly different.
    Second, 1 is apperently dead in this splay, but if we are near Observer Causality in the tree of possibilities, things should be wildly different.
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    Gramer is fine. Why do we have this caregory‽ There are so many better things to use the fourth set of stars to rate! Setting! Consistency! Message!
  • CornitaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The setting of the story is my taste. Also, I read it with great interest because the unique setting was a new seasoning for the story. I'm looking forward to what will happen in the future. Most of the magic-related stories I've read are bright and happy, so this rather dark story feels new. If you're a little tired of the existing magic story, you might want to read it.
  • FantasyScienceRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
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