Zero's Story

Self-Published

Description

Zero is a man that is broken.

"Me, a monster with a happy ending....?"

"Is this all I am, Darkness and despair?"

"Maybe I can become more than just darkness."

In the world of magic and wonder, will he be able to change, or will he only be consumed by the past which haunts him?

Or will Someone save him from himself?.....

You are more than just darkness, Zero, you are..."

Well, the only way to find out is if you follow Zero's Story until the end...

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Raphael BlackwellRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I have only read it very briefly so far, but anyone that reads the first chapter can see the clear inexperience of the author from the slightly unrealistic dialogues amplified by a series of light gramatical errors that make it a bit hard to swallow. I'm gonna try reading some more since the author is a new one and in most occasions the dialogues and grammar can be fixed with the help of a proofreader or editor, so I'll hope the author either starts proofreading his chapters or gets someone to do it for him.
Maybe it can even become good later on, though it might be too... edgy on some points.
Though I admit that I'm mostly going to keep reading it because there will clearly be some romance according to the first chapters.