Zenith Zone: Patching the World as a System Dev

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Description

Zayd Naughton, one of the top-ranked players in the game, "Chronicle Odyssey", manages to defeat the final boss in the game's latest quest alongside his guild but is dismayed to find out the game will be shut down soon after. His frustration with the glory he obtained in the game becoming meaningless is overshadowed when the whole world is struck by an unforeseen catastrophe. On the verge of death due to this disaster, he wishes for a second chance to have a real impact in life and fix this broken world. What answers his wish is a mysterious being who offers him a contract where he will become the one to patch the world's system itself.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Maverick26

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 7
Views: 3,803

Chapters(8 total)

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★★★★ 4.0
Style: The writing style is alright. It’s nothing mind blowing but I’d still call it good. My only personal grip is the charts and stuff being plastered in the middle of the chapter, but I think that’s just a me thing considering the most popular books on here to do that. But the style itself is consistent and there isn’t any tense switching which is great.
Story: so far it’s okay. As I said with the style, it’s nothing too crazy. It’s too early to call it good or bad but I can say it has the potential to become something great.
Characters: This might sounds a bit harsh but the characters are sort of boring Imo. But it’s still early so they have a lot of room to grow. The MC just feels sort of stale to me, which is a problem I also struggle with as a writer myself so I get it. I think with more time, the MC may become more interesting.
Grammar: In my opinion grammar is more important than any other part of the story. It doesn’t matter how interesting the premise is, if the grammar sucks I’m out. I am happy to say the grammar is basically perfect. The best part of the story is how well written it is.
I’d say I’d you’re into stats sheets and litrpgs, give this one a try. It has a decent story with pretty good characters that have the potential to grow.