Wraith Eminence-an evil dungeon core
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What is evil?
The destruction of life? The sacrifice of the many for the good of the one? The manipulation of others in persuit of your own goals? Many consider that to be evil others call it being a dungeon. Wraith is a dungeon who specializes in dark mana and undead creations, like all dungeons he wants to be the best at what he does and compete with the other dungeons around him inbetween baiting adventures by kidnapping the blacksmiths daughter, poisoning the town well, blackmailing the mayor all in the deliberate effort to bring adventures to his dungeon to kill them take a part of ther soul and all the mana in their body as well as their treasure. Is he evil, definetly, more evil than most dungeons, undeniably.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- JoshuaWiebelhaus
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- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 312
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- 24,127
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(5)
- CaptainLoserRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0So I’m not super good with the writin word but I did note that some times theiyr’re are words that just don’t fit but other than that it’s super I only started reading it because my other stories are posting to slow but I’m glad that I did lots of fun
- Arcane LuckRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I love dungeon storys but a lot of themhave a "good" main character, so it's refreshing to read about one that isn't afraid to be chaotic. The story is fantastic and you get a new perspective on dungeons. There are some grammar problems but they are easy to look past and enjoy the story for what it is.
- SandsforeverRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0B2 ch22( read it even on haitus)
Some spelling grammer errors
But the story is good if you have time to kill and you enjoy reading murdery dungeon fun then read it - Mighty MoushieRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5So I only read three chapters before I felt I had to review it. The story is interesting, the characters have potential. It could be a great new dungeon story. But.
The grammar is an issue. The first paragraph repeatedly uses "adventures" instead of "adventurers." It doesn't get much better in the three chapters I read. I personally don't mind a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but the number of errors per chapter just killed the story for me. Which is sad, because I really want to read more.
With editing, this could be a top story on this site. Without it, I have to give it an overall score of 3.5 stars. - AscendantRoyal Road★★★ 3.0could be pretty good i await its development