Would you please become the Demon Lord? (COMPLETED)

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What happens when a real demon lord appeared from the fake ones? Then let's add that this new demon lord which does not know a thing or two about how the world works and only hates humanity. Drake was once a subject of cruelty of humanity. He was locked up and forced to undergo traumatizing experiences but managed to break out from the chains that bounds him. With only the goal of destroying the human race, how will the new world fare in the face of this ignorantly black-hearted new demon lord?

Luna here! Please note that the image cover for this work is not mine and only browsed google randomly. If the owner of the picture does not want me to use it, please send me a mail and I will take it down. I don't own even a shred of rights to the cover picture I just want to bask under its glory until it last. I don't have a shred of artistic bone too so my best friend google image does that for me.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2017
Author: EviLuna

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 307
Views: 197,406

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Community Reviews(8)

Mashuk Yasar PrioRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really love this one. This novel kept mesmerising. One of my biggest regrets were it's was not much big novel. But still i love this ending. Thank you author for gifting us this amazing story.
JanemarieRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Im not strict on ratings but I like this novel, and I dont like hateful ratings
DjasfranorRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Fun read, the early chapters took a bit for me to get into it but in the end it was worth it. There are some interesting depictions in Drakes madness but for the lack of better words it feels like the inconsistencies are a bit too rational.
Especially like the worldbuilding, keeping things shrouded where they should and not trying to describe everything a bit is a skill on its own.
I commend on the author taking a stance and not holding back too much on words. While personally not informed of the whole background i feel taking up arms against perceived injustice is important and fits well into this stage.
Never let the Trolls win. (As the authors opinions are actual chapters i see them fit to be addressed in this review as being part of the work as a whole)
LucariaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The writing is s bit clumsy at times, but that doesn't make this story any less.
In here you will find the greatest moral dilemma a human can ever face.
coledrmdRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
What catches my attention about this story is that it has a direction that it wants to go in and it isn't trapped in a pre-established mold. This story actually has a message to say about humanity and life in general which sets it apart from mindless wish fulfilment.
The author appears to be willing and able to improve his abilities and also edit his work. In time this might become one of the rare gems on this website, but even if it doesn't I can safely say that I have enjoyed reading it.
KorstRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Sytle
The writing is engaging in it's own way. The author has a way of making you feel engaged in the story and follow along with it. It could use a lot of work, but it's at least interesting. I still don't know what a dirt grandson is supposed to be however and highly doubt the author's main language is english.
Story
The story is based upon a standard summoning setting. The standard setting of an overpower main character coming to an under developed world that relies heavilly on magic is also upheld. The only real twist this time however is that the MC is the demon lord, increadibly stupid and ignorantly blackhearted. There is also a sub plot of the demonlord being a figure head to unide humanity and supress the other races. Not an englightened work, but it has it's moments.
Grammar
As I said, I highly doubt the authors main language is english. The grammar is poor more often than not. However there are times that sentances managed to make a degree of sense. It's mostly during these sentances that most of the plot is shoved into the readers eyes. Don't expect proper wordings or sentaces whenever the MC is involved. Most of the content involving the MC is barely readable.
Character
None of them are likeable, it's a common problem that a lot of authors have. It's not even that you like you hate the characters, it's just that the character each feel lazing and quirky to an annoying degree. I can't say there a single character in this story that doesn't seem to get bored of a subject after a paragraph or two.
Overview
All in all? It's a mediocre story with a lazy author that seems to lose interest every other sentance. I advise against attempting to read this.
NeotrixRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
This novel could have had the potential to top the genre even with its shaky wording and not so clear grammar at the early chapters but start getting into the later chapter you begin to realize the complexity of what this story is trying to tell, A shame that only once its gets its footing of the ground it was immediately shot in the head. Ive always been on mindset that the journey is what is most important not just the destination, but goddamn do i hate how the ending spoiled the entire journey, A literal novels' worth of charcter developement all reduced to single paragraph can simply destroy the entire premise of your novel without proper buildup no matter the preceding text.
TL;DR : Dont waste you time reading this because I did and all my hours spent reading was thoroughly wasted in the last chapter.
If you want a recommendation about similar main characters and premise then you can read "the girl who ate a death god" look for a WN release by SpicyEPubs.
Consequently if you are looking for the complete opposite of the genre then put "The Main Heroines are Trying to Kill Me" in your reading list as it only has 15 ch and it hurts trying to wait every day for a new chapter (speaking from experience) it can found on the novelupdates site
XystOblivionRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
in a story, one must maintain a certain amount of reality when writing to ensure that the sentient beings within said story make decisions that make a degree of sense. I feel like this story lacks this and perhaps it speaks to the author's laziness when writing.
style: mediocre and unoriginal, I've seen it many times before.
story: haven't read much but from what I have read, op character is op. Great, so original and totally not a result of lazy writing. Maybe something interesting happens later on, I don't care I'm not staying to find out.
grammar: I'm sure the author is trying his/her best but seriously, the grammar sucks a*s.
Character: seems to be a dude with some serious mental issues. I mean sure I guess thats somewhat original but I can't say I like his personality. Haven't really been many other characters to the point I've read so I'll limit it to this.
another meh story
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