Within the Bone

Self-Published

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Description

Old sins, they say, cast long shadows. Born into a world of magic with not only none of her own, but with a power inside her that actively negates magic, Mara Spell-Breaker has learned to endure her place as a pariah and perpetual outsider among the people of the Red Mountains. At least, until a chance meeting in the woods promises a new world and hope of escape. Then, when the specter of death rears its ugly head, the intervention of a dark hand offers her even more: power enough to break an ancient curse and a path between two worlds.

The past is not only her prison, though, but the punishment of Heaven on all her kind. The hubris of Mara's people summons forth the end of their world at the hands of a power so great that it will not stop until only the ashes of a civilization remain.

[F/F]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: K. Olsen

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Rating: 4.9/ 5.0
Followers: 54
Views: 15,805

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Community Reviews(2)

BanjaxBanditRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story reads like a professional novel. Grammar is perfect, or at least it is to my view, the story has been riveting thus far and I really enjoy Mara's character. Her and those around her feel real and I'm absurdly excited for what comes next since at the time of writing, chapter 10 looks like its when things kick off. I suspect this is prime material for rising stars if this level of quality is maintained.
milah42000Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Essa história é maravilhosa não sei como não tem mais comentários . Gosto de como a história de amor deles e a história geral do personagem não entre em conflito, uma história que se desenrola em um bom ritmo e me faz sentir bem por dentro.
A gramática é boa, embora eu não seja um falante nativo, não tive nenhum problema.
E o personagem principal é maravilhosamente real. Eu amo que ela não é uma linda loira de olhos azuis que não sabe que ela é linda. Ela tem cicatrizes e feridas e eu gosto disso, faz dela uma personagem mais dura.