Will of Whispers [Isekai LitRPG]

Self-Published

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Description

In the multiverse, control is an illusion.

Cal Run, a skilled agent of the Anu’aris Theocracy, finds himself trapped in a mysterious world of magic and monsters.

Introduced to integrated space by a surprisingly familiar and potentially defective system guidance protocol, Cal and his companion, Temp, must face the call of both modern and ancient power as they pave their path to survival with blood and gusto.

Oh yeah, andTemp is a chair.

Readers can expect:

Weak to very strong progression (with both cultivation and system growth elements)

Complex, flawed characters who make mistakes and grow throughout thelongstory (often making hypotheses that are later disproven)

A balance of action, worldbuilding, mystery, and eventually crafting (MC sucks at engineering, but loves it)

Vast universe with conflict, threats, and world building.

Many tropes, some subverted

No Harem. No whiny or murderhobo MC

Current Schedule:

Chapters daily, 7x a week

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: RokoRaspberry

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 679
Views: 103,557

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Community Reviews(10)

DimensionalWriter27Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall, the story not only has a great start but thankfully, continues to do so. For an LITRPG, it remained a serious one, with hints of comedy that were appreciated.
Grammar: there were a few grammatical errors, but they were minor enough that I could just ignore and enjoy the story.
Style: I know this might not be EVERYONE's cup of tea...but I will say that I personally like the character-focused chapters where the attention is put on the emotions they are going through. It makes the characters feel relatable but also tells the reader how much care has been put on by the author to make it happen. Again, that's my personal opinion on it, but I can understand if it doesn't work for people who want the story to move forward.
Story: The story's good so far. Its hard to review it so soon when the story has just begun, but it has shown competent world-building and the characters are likable enough that you want to follow along.
Characters: Okay...I know I shouldn't reserve the entire character section just for ONE character, buuuut...I'm sorry, I see blunt A.I character that has hints of conflict with another character, I'm contractedly obligated to consider it my favorite character in any story, It's the rules, I'm sorry. But on a more...serious note, I guess, the characters are good, need to see more of them to see if they improve or not
keeganashleyliveRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
We start out with punchy action, and the story continues along that same thread—something I’m a fan of. You think you’re starting to figure out what’s going on when—wham! The LitRPG twist hits you and you’re suddenly in a whole, new, strange world: crunchy stats, quests, numbers you’re not sure what they mean yet…all of it. Kudos to the author for making these transitions seem smooth. The pacing is really good there, and I think it helps pull this story off in a really positive manner.
The writing is also smooth. It has a very movement-directed feel to it and flows well. The dialogue is very natural. As a reader, I appreciated all of these things. I didn’t notice any grammar issues or clunky wording that got in the way of my enjoyment of the work, so excellent job there as well.
I do wish there was a little more engagement with the main character. I guess I’m an emotional reader as well as an action-based reader. The battle scenes are there. The tension is there. I just may have added just a bit more connection to the character—some sort of more backstory or emotional tug. …And this is me just being nitpicky because, honestly, this story is great. I’m going to follow and favorite it. I look forward to seeing it grow!
Mike71414Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is an excellent story so far, and I expect it to do well in the future.
Style: The author's writing is very strong; scenes are described with a good amount of detail and nothing felt hard to follow at all. It's important that people can read a story without getting confused or lost about what's going on, so I really appreciate that about this one.
Grammar: No problems that I noticed! I don't remember coming across any typos, so if they were there they must not have been too bad!
Story: This is a really focused story so far. Right now where I'm at the MC is training to grow stronger in the woods, and it has that feel of classic LitRPG where it's what you expect but different enough to keep you interested. Some intrigue was introduced through the introduction isekai, so I look forward to seeing how that plays out as well.
Characters: The MC is quite likable imo. He's determined and very driven, but does not at all seem like an emotionless killing machine like some stories feature. I like the interactions between him and the AI too, I think it's a cool way of introducing some dialogue and character interactions early in the story.
Overall I think this is a really excellent and focused start to a story. It feels like it has a direction and forward momentum, which makes it really fun to read!
spookerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style: Consistent, brisk, and vivid. Found a couple places where it gets a little wordy during action, but not excessively distracting. The story seems to have an idea where it's going, and it's almost in a hurry to get there. Given that we know very little at the start, I can understand the impulse. I'm hoping to see more dialogue as the story gets thicker. For example, in the latest chapter I've read (ch9), there are a couple paragraphs going "Temp had asked... Cal said... Temp had commented... Cal in turn called". Feels like that could be dialogue. Then again, I'm nitpicking at this point.
Story: The story's good so far. The world building is probably the make or break of this story, more so than other stories. Like most of this genre, we're learning about two different worlds at once, so some of it could get confusing, but the author's done a decent enough job keeping it grounded on one character so far. Good suspense building at the very least. This part is hard to review so early in the story, but I'll give it a shaky 5 for now.
Grammar: No major issues.
Character: The two characters in here so far are well written and likeable enough, and there should be more of them. But it's the beginning of the story, so it's understandable why there aren't more. I can sometimes almost feel like the story's drifting towards Temp's third-person POV, but it snaps back quickly; that's more a style thing.
BeezeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
When I saw this book's cover, I thought to myself that it looked like it would be quite the unique one, and I was not dissapointed. I have to say, the perspective provided of the companion becoming this chair... I haven't seen the concept done before. It is quite unique!
For Style, the Author has a unique blend to their style and has the story perpective in a way where everything gets on point and shows the picture of the world. Grammar, I only noticed small mistakes, but they were very minor. This Author uses great descriptions.
As far as the story go, it is followable and I do like the way it is going so far with the chair and the way the system was introduced. It is a unique set-up, but there is one thing about it, and there is that I believe there should be some more character interaction in the beginning to get a general feel for the character's emotions. Now I know it is not necessary, and by no means is this not action packed and the characters not emotional, but I feel like they can express themselves a bit more. It may just be a nitpick but it to me feels like there was some points where character interaction could have happened to develop them further. This by no means does not mean that they are not written in well; however, the characters themselves left room fto be desired for their development, which may of course happen chapters down the lines, but it is important in the beginning as well.
Overall, this is a good and Unique Story with the Concept executed well. It may have a few flaws, but to me it is still worth the actions you get out of this story , as well as the Characters, who are a unique pair. Just for the unique combination and execution of it, I believe this is worth checking out, and for the story, You just have got to check this out! This is a Great Novel in the making.
9/10 .
DWWRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I love the story. The world building is great, the backstory is fleshing out nicely and the MC is solid and multi dimensional. There haven't been too many side characters or NPC's, but the few we've seen have been well imagined.
My only issue with the story is the overly flowery and "clever" language. The author is never one to use 1 word when 2-3 will do. Sometimes passages feel like abit of a word salad. Its not enough to put the reader off but it's a continuous low level annoyance. Hopefully nothing that can't be fixed by an editor if it goes to print.
Overall this story is worth a look and I'd recommend you giving it a chance.
DestinyDOGRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Read 5 Chapters of Will of Whispers.
I like how the story gradually introduces the complexity of the characters’ relationships, particularly between Cal and Sari. The dynamic is professional yet hints at a deeper connection, providing a solid foundation for character development.
I felt the introduction of the space-cult and the subsequent twist with the wooden box intriguing. It raises questions about the true nature of the mission and the secrets behind the cult.
I guess the transition into an unknown world was a bit abrupt but effectively conveyed Cal's disorientation and the immediate shift in his reality.
Also, the blend of technology and ancient magic is fascinating and opens up many possibilities for the plot.
But what I like the most is the evolution of Cal and Temp's partnership, especially how it shifts from a standard human-AI relationship to something far more complex and intertwined.
Overall, the first five chapters of Will of Whispers promise an adventurous and mystical journey filled with challenges and unknowns. I am curious to see, from Chapter 5 on, how Cal adapts to his new environment and what the future holds for him and Temp in Hetar-172.
Semantics-wise:
Good grammar. Not really a fan of the style, but growing to be used to it! Keep it up!
Dennis ARoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The style of prose wants to be engaging but fails to be consistent. There are descriptions of motivations without anything having occurred to justify them. Suvivalist actions are described but relevant details are skipped. Words are used that don't mean what seems to be intended. Very little is revealed about Cal's world/society of origin other than it is nothing like ours. Cal's backstory is also barely hinted at. By this point nothing has occurred to cause me to care about what happens to Cal. In the first few chapters there are sparks of personality but once Cal leaves the room, that all disappears.
I'll keep reading because comments from the author have indicated the story improves. If things have improved by chapter 30, I'll update this review.
ShyBoyRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Heck, this also needs a fix!
Style: 3. I'd like simpler prose. Less metaphors and distractions, so that, when they're used, it hits with more power. I found the metaphors here mostly distracting from, rather than adding to the scene.
Grammar: 5 (updated score). Re-read the initial chapters. Rare occasional typo or a missed space or no capital letter after a comma - minor stuff. If you think it's an error, check out spelling and you may find it's not, it's just a rarer spelling (e.g. "bigshot") or proper usage ("Just deserts").
Characters: 2. First of all, there's very little dialogue. Then, there's the matter of what the story focuses on. Thirdly, we have Cal and Temp, and Temp is an AI. And while for 11 chapters it's hinted that Temp's "not just an AI" or plain stated that "unlikely for AI" or even more directly said "more than an AI"... but it's never explored. At least, not in a way I'd call "exploring", and not in those chapters I read. Which leaves us with our MC, Cal. Unfortunately...
there are forces at play that rob Cal of his agenda. He is being influenced by sudden change, by some... "magic"? perhaps even "brainwashing" of sorts? Also, the transfer separated his "bloodline" from him?
Heck! The same ("magical" influence) happens with Temp and EVEN BEFORE being isekaied.
Now, this could all be mighty-fine to explore and learn about... but Cal's personality doesn't much like introspection, but prefers action. Any kind of action. Like, absorbing weird otherworldly things inside him, cause "feelings". He is a highly trained spec-operative after all. A true professional. Sarcasm aside, this may have been intentional and may be what the author intended. Characters here are meant to be flawed (good!). It's just... aside from punny surname*, battle action, and manly prowess... I don't know why should I root for Cal. But I could list several flaws he has. And I really dislike lack of introspection. Perhaps that's what the author meant, by promising "no whiny MC"...
FaercesRoyal Road
★ 1.0
This is a traditional litRPG isekai about being transported to a new world with an AI tag along buddy. A hack and slash grinding story that rings true to the genre.
We're a couple chapters in and the main character is already dead-set on the idea surviving and levelling, mind not about being thrust in the world from a traumatic incident. It does a rough job at making us empathize and care for the main character because he seems to be fitting in perfectly fine despite the slow adaptation.
The writing is fine but some bits feel very clunky and roundabout when it comes to introspective moments from our main character. This story has fun dialogue but still feels emotionally empty. With a majority of flaws being just the fact that hook itself is uncreative and doesn't necessarily suck you in to it's plot afterwards.
All in all, a decent but generic story.