Wholly Undead

Self-Published

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Description

Join Jack, after his death by microwaved food, as he reincarnates into the body of a ruler of an undead kingdom in a strange environment of the underworld. Follow our, wannabe nihilist and socially awkward, hero as he learns about his world, and tries to play the part of their supreme pontiff and ruler of the Holy Kingdom of Deagoth.The novel features heavy world-building elements, many characters, drama, cultivation, and magic.Give it a try, and leave a review.And here is a map to help understand locations, as they are mentioned in the story.https://i.imgur.com/ZrJOvLa.jpg

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Voidmirage

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,278
Views: 1,304,273

Chapters(254 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

tkaliusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
For the type of story this is, it's very good.
What blows me away is that a story like this is rated lower than stories like Delve which has reviews that are borderline fanatic with absolutely no basis for it.
Granted this story has harem elements which some people dislike, but usually the problem with harems is that you have these incredibly one-dimensional characters that are collected like pokemon. All the harem members in this series are very fleshed out characters, and even their interactions with each other are interesting and somewhat realistic. I would say this, so far, is one of the few instances where harem is done right.
It has some fairly "original" elements to it, but most aspects are true to the genre, which isn't necessarily bad because I feel the author still manages to make them interesting. There's a lot of people who are originality purists, who will unendingly praise anything they think is original (which in most cases is simply less popular, they just have a very narrow range of reading) even when those elements are super boring and stale.
At the end of the day the author has a very high update speed, the characters have distinct personalities with amusing banter, and you will likely enjoy reading it, even if you don't traditionaly enjoy specific elements of it.
bene452Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Unique, interesting story and worldbuildind and great characters. Cant wait for more
PositiveskewmanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It's a fun story, I would recommend it if you are looking for a light-hearted read
Personally I feel that too much time is spent on the antagonist.
SevenShadeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Im writing this review because im dropping this at chapter 173.... ITS ACTUALLY ME that sont like PUSSINESS .... i cant stomach every pussy chapter in almost every 6 chapter...ITS A GOOD NOVEL if a may say But my standards donot comply me to continue reading this...YOU SHOULD READ THIS NOVEL though i stopped doesnt mean u will so try it.
Silencer7Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
As of chapter 28, I can sincerely say that not only is this novel well written, there is also barely ANY grammatical and for one such as myself nothing is more off putting than an error pervaded story.
BionaireRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Absolutley loved it. The story was great and to my liking, although personally some parts of the story were not too great (hence the 4.5 stars not 5) I dislike the romance aspects of the story as I felt they were a bit too overdone. Other than that, its a great read and the author did an excellent job.
UrobrouSRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Read up to ch.66, so I feel comfortable to post an advanced review that tears a little deep into the work.
Grammar:
It's what either makes a read interesting with the use of unique language and speech, or gives your eyes visual HIV and/or cancer.
The story has all around OK grammar, but the author really needs to work on the sturcture of his sentences, take heed as to not write as he speaks, use more commas and fullstops, and make sure to not forget his "and, a" and so forth - while I am not a native english speaker, my english is native-level, and good enough for these things to really grate on my nerves.
In this story, it's really not that bad, but it definitely can be improved upon.
An editor would also help.
The style is essentially overlord, but without the shadow of japanese culture restraining our hero. It's fresh enough and entertaining. the story's still in what I'd call the 1st arc, so we don't know enough about the world and characters to make a judgement, but tthe style thus far deliveres - I would like less earth references, and to see the word "anime" less; we're all fellow weebs, but no respectable man of culture does a shinji-in-the-hostpital without closing his curtains first.
The caracters don't feel one-dimensional. Some of them are tropey, some of them are generic - which is important to make the main characters look more impressive by contrast, and gives disposable mobs as tools to the author - but they are rather interesting, and feel like they do have a life. It's centered around the MC, but not in a bad way.
The story is quite good. It borrows a lot from other tales, and is rather easy to get, but while you can guess how a scenario will unfold, there's a good chance you'd be unbalanced by the outcome. a very refreshing experience for a veteran on the royalroad platform.
Overall, a recommended read for people waiting on overlord, recovering from an antihero story completed or on hiatus (which means it's canceled but the author's too much of a
KoooomakimiRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I really like it so far, the only thing I'm a bit disappointed about is the fact that he wasted a lot of his time sleeping and being lazy instead of cultivating
ZethuronRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Overall this has been a fine story, though i coulnt help but to compare it to Overlord, with this story using many elements from there. This story is also somewhat cliched in the same ways as Overlord, but i dont necessarily consider that a bad thing.
This story starts in the Holy Undead Kingdom of Deagoth, where the Holy Witch King has been entombed for a thousand years. Then he reawakens, but not all is as it seems to be, for the Holy Witch King is not the person he was once, a reincarnee from Earth took his place and is put in his spot, without knowing anything.
The MC bluffs his way through the problems of his kingdom, and like Overlord, it somehow succeeds. One thing i do like about him, is that he does take action himself, even if he is a sort of coward on the inside, also expect him to do some references to other media in this story.
The other characters are fine, but i feel like they could be developed even more, to feel more real.
Sadly enough, grammar is a major problem in this story, with there being wrongly used tenses, many typo's and simple grammatical mistakes. I have to recommend the author to edit the story, or get someone to help him, it would improve the readablity of this story so much.
Currently a fast release speed, so no problems on that front.
This story is a fun, enjoyable read, even with its flaws. Recommend for anyone who likes a ton of misunderstandings, or just wants to read a story like Overlord.
BidaoRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Good story, a lot of grammar error (I don't speak English, but I was able to see them). All in all it's good but I'm am not a fan of harem and I hat Japanese's novel because of them. I repeat the story is interesting but when the romance feel just like a Japanese novel. I know it is not for me