When I was old

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Description

You! Yeah I'm talking about you. If you are scrolling down the latest update as a matter of habitude, chances are that you, at least once, dreamed about reincarnating in xianxia world.But let's suppose you got this chance, this impossibly ridiculous once in one million lifetimes chance, what do you think would happen? Will you get spme kind of random boast, just because of reasons. Will you be favored by god, while there are countless other persons far more interesting than you. Or maybe you will stamble randomly, on the most dangerous treasure of all, in the weakest province of all, in the weakest country of all, that is like you have guessed in the crapiest continent of all.But if you didn't, then how will you shine, how will you break free from the chains of fate, how will you become the role model of countless other juniors. If you have the same feeling I had when I first started this story, then the answer should have already been written clear on your mind, ""Wits and guts"", the one who said that if you have guts you don't have wits and vice versa, is but a pussy who couldn't do so.In this story, we will be watching as our MC Oniyama (name might be changed when he will rebirth) as he will go against society one more time, but this time on a much grander level than just games and morals, this time, it will be multiuniversal battle, we will see how fate try playing a foul out of him, but not succeding at anytime, until he finally transceed the law of reality.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Yorth

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 137
Views: 93,586

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Community Reviews(5)

HexwolfxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really like this series when is the next ch?. I also like too add if the A.I well be coming back she'd make a interesting love interested.
CaliberusRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Get a few people to PR your work, and consider using words to type it out first for easy to spot grammar/ spelling checks before you post? Anyways keep up the good work.
AziroFFRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
intresting story but many grammar mistakes and plot holes,some moments i don't understand anything,like whats happening or who's talking......
irondruid7Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
If you're into Xianxia story's than this is probably something you could enjoy. Even though some of the idea's aren't that original, the story still looks to be promising. Be warned however, the author will blackmail you with threats of delayed chapters and cliffhangers lol.
daimyo29Royal Road
★ 1.0
I like the Xianxia-reincarnation settings. I wanted to like and enjoy this story but i can't.
The story is nothing new, neither bad nor good. Typical Xianxia-reincarnation.
The grammar I don't really care to much. For me it's ok.
The characters are interesting and have the potential to be good, BUT:
The writing is bad (i'm sorry for the author, but that is the only way to put it). The chapters feel patch together, rather that one continuous story. Jarring changes in POV's, settings and action from one paragraph to the next, with no explanation (and sometime no logic). Characters appearing at random without explanation. Useless details given long and complex explanation while important situation/action are gloss over or given a minimum of explanation. The dialog a lot of time is force just so that the author can make a joke or to try to force an emotional response from the reader.
The fell that I get from reading this, is that the author just tries too hard when writing. He tries to make the story big and complex, but lack the experience to do so.
It he would just keep the story more simple and direct I think he can write a better story.