Whaa.. I died ??
Self-Published
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Description
Apparently i died.A god before me said: to bad kid your dead is to early.In the book of destiny it was not your time.So how about a second chance in my world !?-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------First this is my first writing novel. so be not to harsh.Second English is not my first language.Third i got Dyslexia so sometimes it will be a bit of a mess.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- joostieh
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
- Views
- 4,691
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- RznRoyal Road★★ 1.5For some reason Royal Road thinks I was already on chapter 2 when I popped into this fiction and I couldn't remember this, I've poked around quite a lot. I went back to re-read the first short chapters and the problems of the fiction range from everything in the punctuation, grammar and even the presentation of the dialogue. It needs to be copyedited and filled out to make it more coherent and readable.
- koolaides65Royal Road★ 0.5A good author no matter how good or how bad two things in common. One they write. Two they listen to the advice given to them in the hopes of becoming better.
As such I would like to give some advice and I hope other readers will too. Your chapter posting are too short to make much sense or provide a cogent story if they were not so RE standard. While I do not require original ideas and no one should, providing your reader with the small Salent details make immersing yourself in a story possible. Second your verbal is garbage and darn near unreadable. A dictation software may help with that and the speed of your writing.
I look forward to more from you.