Weakness is the Greatest Strength

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Description

An unfortunate accident, at a time when a man cannot afford to be killed, a tragedy when someone is taken out during their prime. While some dream of eternal salvation, others dream of going into some fantasy world upon death, but what if a person doesn't want to go?

Thrust into a strange world where nothing makes sense our Valliant hero becomes a pariah, a villain, and most of all is considered weak, but this could not be further from the truth, as sometimes what others consider a weakness is just a strength that has yet to be realized. With a stubborn determination can our hero carve out his own happiness in a world that he isn't even supposed to be in?

(This is my first time writing anything fully fantasy. So please forgive me if anything comes across as strange. I've only written [admittedly shitty] science fiction prior to this. So I hope you all enjoy!)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Crazyraptor25

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Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 49
Views: 41,993

Chapters(60 total)

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HassanthenoobRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I read up to chapter 17
- Grammar 5/5: No grammatical issues popped out to me, and I went through a couple of fight scenes where everything was well written. I will rate it
- Style 3/5: IMO this is where the most work is needed, the pace can be a bit too fast and the mood shifts can be jarring at time. One paragraph the MC is light and joking the next he will be talking about life purposes and hatred. One paragraph he is having lunch and talking to someone, the next he is getting attacked at a later point in time.
I feel like if there were paragraphs in the middle just as a shift it would work a lot better. I know a lot of authors on RR stretch events too much but in this case it's too little to the point its affecting the immersion into the story.
- Plot & Worldbuilding 2.5/5: The plot follows our isekaid MC into a fantasy world, there are noble families and political intrigue and a lot of interesting new races, but overall nothing completely different if you've read 2 or more portal fantasy stories.
Characters: 2/5: I will divide this section into 2 parts, first the main character and next the side characters.
Main Character: he reads like a gary stu. Nothing is unique to him, despite having being isekaid at 35 years of age and owning multiple companies. We never really see him thinking about them after having isekaid, for some reason he completely accepts the fact that he is in a new world with no questions at all.
Another issue is that the MC got cursed and he can't be physically strong, yet he seems to have no trouble defeating multiple magically enhanced royal knight with his little combat experience. He is also completely fine breaking bones while training, getting said broken bones healed, then continuing training. There was a training session where he got his bones broken 40 times... Why? Getting so many bones broken in a single day is traumatizing yet he shrugs it off like its nothing.
That is unfortunately the disappointing thing about the MC, he has a lo