WAUMB (Draft Point)
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Description
Aljen Mura, a decent and workaholic Gaming Manager, was celebrating New Year's Eve alone in the park but hit by a fireworks. Waking up from his bed and finding out he possessed one of the villainous character from his games because he got summoned by self-proclaimed "God". He wished to end the game fair and square by starting to end his family lineage and lived in this world free.
Watch our protagonist as he tried his best to end his mafia life but accidentally made him infamous, increased his fame and became the World's most powerful and influencial man in the history of Italia.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Red Adam
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 262
- Views
- 139,909
Chapters(46 total)
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Community Reviews(10)
- Adelaide45Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0The plot is interesting and the hilarious inner thoughts of the Mc is so amazing to follow up. The deep relationship between him and his butler is so fantastic. I always love to read something interesting like this in this server. Nothing is common nowadays.
The author appears love to make something unique and interesting series. I love the YAOI the forbidden relationship in each chapters. The character justin has a crush (maybe) to his master (boss). Lmao, I will follow this series.
Although, the author already answered my question about this one, I know he is making something big that girls like us love so much. The grammars improve everytime and the humors are so impressive to read that can be easily understand by simple individuals like me. Only retards and local readers won't understand what Im trying to say.
Highly Recommended. Good Job to the author. - Aurora YrsickhzRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Do you know why I rated it in perfect score? Do you know why?
Spoiler Alert:
1. Unique story setting. From the first start of the stories like the generic genre of Isekai, all of the Mc have died in miserable way by Truck-san and other types of commonly used. The Mc was forcefully transferred by so called God named Stump G (referred by the MC only). The thoughts and mimics of the Mc are so hilarious to read. As in he was like a true person in real life, facing a heavy burden on his life. 8/10
2. There is a masochist butler named Justin as well. I started to become his fan girl because of his picture! *Fan girl screamed!* I don't know if the author is planning to make a fudoshi type (yaoi) to his novel but he is so funny to follow up. Girls like me, loves to read this kind of character. Good job, author. But make sure, you make your MC straight man and find him true love >>> not this one of course.
3. To be continued..... Joke, the problem of the story... the grammar is in average circumstance but because of the unique and new writing style, the plot is still in good shape.
9.8/10.
Highly recommended. - Mrsmoku98Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Avoid this novel like you avoid drugs. It's addicting, and you would regret reading it NOW because there are only 10 chapters written so far
- Redfox21Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5Its a great book if u into mafia and magic cant wait to see how it turns out
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Ever seen that tumblr posts about the fake president who tried his best to be as terrible as possible but unintentionally turned out to be the greatest president that ever lived? Yeah, that's basically what this one is. Guy rejects the mafia life, but the mafia life ain't letting him go that easy.
Fun for the whole family but likely only read by you. I do recommend it. 4.5/5 - Averroes93Royal Road★★★ 3.0An interesting story. The grammar and sentence are not that good, but still readable. Some of the side characters seems like it were only introduced to show that MC is normal? Like can use his brain as properly as he can.
- MathiRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Before reading i looked for some of the reviews.
some praised the story to the high heavens. i beg to differ.
for a ''japanese'' style story (not my favorite by far btw) it is nicely written and is enjoyable enough to read.
the story is, as tagged, a reincarnation story. The author started the story not quite with the usual cliché but it isnt that much of a difference to make it the super hit some other people make it out to be imo.
i didn't read far enough to ake much of a rating so i gave a generous rating of slightly above average (3,5*)
the same goes for the character score. 3* (avarage rating) because of not enough information/reading time (though i dont like the japanese style with all gentleman up front but every maid/little female employe needs to put out pu**y to get employed!
as for grammar...
if you ever read MT and got through more than one chapter you will survive that one as well, without getting eyecancer.
the intent what the author wants to say comes pretty much always across without needing to think about it to long but you will stumble over many mistakes with the tenses as well as wrong wording like "in" instead of "at" wich is enjoyable in its own way sometimes, but stops the reading flow.
here an example form chap 0: "Well then, good day. I just wanna learn how can my favorite character will live in my side."
'I just want to know how my favorite character will live at my side' most likely?
i would recomend the author to get an editor asap!
as for the story, there seems to be enough people who love it. it just isnt my cup of tea and the bad grammar is killing it for me.
if you love a japanes styled story with a italian mafia setting and dont mind reading avarage (for RRL) grammar then go for it
you've been warned :P
(read up to chapter 2) - SillyCalicoRoyal Road★★ 2.0Read it cause so many nice review...
18 ch. in and well, I'm sorry, but it's so-so at best..
Take it with grain of salt, as it's really subjective
Interesting premise, as most of this kind of story usually set in otome game, the prblem most reader can agree with is the grammar, not perfect but readable, definitely need editor and proofreader
The thing that really bugging me is the character tho, mc potray as 40 years old man, experience with society, can't confront woman he just meet cause she look stern, not to mention he really mess up his priority. Now that's mc, the other chara is no better, sadistic but stupid butler, really love son and daughter chief, air head ex maid, typical villaine mob here and there, I don't even know whether it's one dimensional or two dimensional character
In conclusion, really great premise, need editing tho for smoother reading experience, but if you really wanna enjoy this story, turn off your brain while reading, don't ask why chara do this when he/she can do that, just accept it and move on with the story. - UnteralterbachRoyal Road★★ 1.5I could understand to put the story in Hiatus or Cancelled if you are going to re-write it or change anything, but tag it as complete when is not complete is only part of the reason of the low score. The story was mildy interesting, true there was a couple of boring scenes (more for me as I could guess others like it more) but just during the climax when things are getting a little better, the story is un-finished with a note saying about Webnovel. Okay, then, why don't just say that from the beginning? Maybe I missed it but that don't mean the story is completed.
- Robbil SaputraRoyal Road★ 0.5This novel has a genre of villain and anti-hero but why the MC of this novel is so good like a hero