Warped World: The Nether Dungeon

Self-Published

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Description

Lenny Nevens loved adventure, games, and the outdoors, but he's also naive and winds up killed by a hippo at the zoo. Now nothing but a soul he gets a once in a life time job offer, and he dosen't get a say in if he accepts or not. So turned into a dungeon and sent off with the vague words have fun your gonna need it, he start his new life.

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So this is my first time writing I hope its good please come on this journey with me :)

Chapters(39 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • aries27Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I will continue to follow this story and more from this creator! My favorite chapter is chapter 4. I can't wait to see what the old lady will do. Keep up the great work. You're very creative. I hope that you will continue to provide content. I'm sure that this will get published soon.
  • G.K.SRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I think that's the story's good but it has a problem where it switches between povs a lot with no signal for when it happens so it's kinda hard to follow. Other then that it seems like it's been well written with some fore thought put in to it. Though the dialogue is kinda flat.
  • Ult the DreamerRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    A nice new spin on the dungeon genre.
    Though not originally what I was looking for in dungeons, I binged it.
    Problems are mostly minor grammatical and spelling errors. Some other stuff could be improved but aside from needing more elaboration on appearances it's all decent quality.
    It's just getting started but it's looking good.