Wanted: Ms. Hacker

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

Wangfei

• Meili
  Dec 20, 2018
• Newbie
  Dec 20, 2018
• Oh Yes
  Dec 15, 2018
• Hands
  Dec 15, 2018
• Meeting a friend
  Dec 12, 2018
• Gift
  Dec 12, 2018
• Surprise
  Dec 6, 2018
• This Queen's Rest
  Dec 6, 2018
• Suspicious
  Dec 6, 2018
• Milk
  Dec 4, 2018
• Filthy Rich
  Dec 4, 2018
• Mu Xiaoxi
  Dec 3, 2018
• Table
  Dec 3, 2018
• Hello, Wandering Soul!
  Dec 2, 2018
• Not simple
  Dec 2, 2018
• Unfortunately
  Dec 1, 2018
• My Cupcake!
  Dec 1, 2018
• Laugh or Cry
  Dec 1, 2018
• Miss is going nuts!
  Dec 1, 2018
• Who am I?
  Nov 30, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Chaos_SeedRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  As the title of this states, this story seriously needs editing. The premise of the story is decent, not exactly original with all the reincarnation stories running amok on this sight, but een after reading eighteen chapters you hardly seen any hacking whatsoever.
  As for style, the Author really needs to work on the flow of paragraphs. Splitting off little one sentence sections when they correlate together makes no sense.
  Again, this story has an interesting twist on the reincarnation genre considering the main character is a hacker instead of getting put into some magic dreamland, but seeing as how the character hacks maybe once or twice in 18 chapters, and that those instances aren't described in any detail, makes the story stay at two stars for me. Obviously the story is just starting out, but if it were me being reincarnated into this story I certainly wouldn't have just sat around without using the laptop to gain information on her new family with her hacking skills.
  Overall, this story needs a significant amount of work. Author, if you read this, I certainly hope you take this as constructive criticism and not an insult. It seems as though English may not be your native tongue, and if it isn't, it may be a good idea to express that inside of the synopsis as others do on this site.
  Best of luck.