VRMMORPG:Arts Cultivation Online

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Description

A college student died and was rebirthed 10 years back from his life thus he started his life as a gamer.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
DionfhelCuyno(Verde)

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESLICE OF LIFE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.8/ 5.0
Followers
58
Views
51,711

Chapters(48 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • DionfhelDucusinCuynoRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    You need Grammarian plus though its generic, I enjoyed how you combine all of it. KEEP IT UP
    You actually wrote slightly better than me... if someone ever rate your work with a low score, you should work it. But of course it will be hard..just treat it as yoir stepping stone.
    I just realizes you were like me, the grammar, should be corrected. Its number one. Then about your plot, im still guessing but its a good style by the way.
    All in all I rated you 3.5..
  • FrostPrismRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Definently not the worst and not the best I have seen on this website. If you want to use shortened words such as Ytube, Bcoin, or IGN you should explain what those mean before you type them like that. And your grammer if you were to read it outloud to yourself before you post it you might solve a lot of your mistakes. Also, what with all the spacing between texts an easy fix would be to either make the texts flow together or cut back on all the spacing.
    Names need to be capitalized
    I would love to keep reading. These types of stories are some of my favorite but untill the grammer gets fixed I just can't do it. Theres too may issues that just need to be fixed
  • FolkensedaiRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    summary of the last chapter :
    Hong!!!!!!
    CLANG.....
    Jovy: TAKE THIS!!!!!
    "GRAAAAAAHHHHH"
    Gin: Gin
    Era: Era
    Jovy : J....Jovy......
    PPPPPPUUUUUFFFFFFF!!!!!!!
    Era: lets make coordination attack.
    Gin: Ok.
    Gin: SWITCH!!!!!!
    Era: Shift
    Jovy:.Eat this
    Jovy: Shift!
    GIN: Shift.
    Eleanor: Grandfather?
    Era: Why did you stop?
    Jovy: Someone is coming.
    May:GIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNN!! GIN!!!
    But May hugged him tightly
    AGH ... fine.
    Eleanor: Sorry for the commotion
    The sky then suddenly open up...
    The openings suddenly grew even more bigger....
  • NiurnRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    What do you have against paragraphs? Are you an orphan because of them; did they kill your family ? Have you vowed to never use one ?
    You fail at making more than one sentence in a paragraph. You need to work on that, you will find you need connectors and logical link and it will structure your writing. You can tremendously improve. As it stands, it’s not readable.
  • CrimsonEclipse18Royal Road
    ★ 0.5
    Thats all . I hope it helps.haha
    Thats all . I hope it helps.haha
    Thats all . I hope it helps.haha
    Thats all . I hope it helps.haha
    Thats all . I hope it helps.haha
  • robo_dogRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    The story is unreadable, I tried but by the fifth chapter the guy is killing mid-game/end-game monsters like the back of his hand. The game just started, he’s been in for a few hours and already he’s got a super rare, super dangerous, super hard to find monster like he bought it from a god damn corner store. Now I’m all for OP characters but the story is too poorly written for it to work. Ya need ta edit the f*#% out of it. To make it a proper story that is work the read. The idea is gold and got me excited but the story was a let down.