Void Merchant
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On a cold rainy night, Noah valentine lay down on the hard asphalt, grasping the wound at his side, wishing for the pain to end.
But this wasn't the end of his story.
Suddenly, the raindrops seemed to freeze in mid air, as if time had stopped. A voice filled Noah's mind and soon his body was engulfed in a bright light. When the light cleared Noah found himself in a world between worlds.
The weird and wonderful inhabitants of this realm called it the Void. Millions of universes all connected to this one place, an infinite variety of technology, magic, and other wonderful things at the tips of his fingers.
With the help the people he met, Noah Valentine began trading unique alien technology with the people of Earth, influencing society, economies and politics on a massive scale. But there are many exotic worlds connected to the void, and dangers lurking in the shadows, what troubles will Noah find along the way?
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- CaptainYumYum12
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- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 110
- Views
- 26,959
Chapters(23 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- cybernightRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I thought this was a pretty cool story so far, even though at the time of writing this there is only 15 chapters released. So far the grammar is good and i haven't once complained about it because it looks well writen, and trust me i have read badly written stuff before. I like this story a lot because it's about a kid who got the short stick in life and ends up with a life altering oppurtunity. And let's just say there is some cool stuff by the end of chapter 15 that wants me to get the author to release more frequently :), and that's about the only bad thing about this, is that as far as i can tell there is no set release of chapters.
- tayco123Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0While the author may be a novice, I didn´t spot any issues in grammar and pacing. I very much like that the chapters are now selfcontained scenes, this makes it easier to read a new chapter, after a week.
To the story ...
I did not know that i wanted this kind of story as much as I do. A story about a kind of orphan that now earns his money as a interdiemesion merchant for earth? Sound strange, but does work very well. The first seeds for the longterm plot are already sown, and I am very sure I missed important foreshadowing as I always do :). I hope both the geopolitical and romantic plot develop well along the main plot.
Congrats to the author, this is a kind of story many promis, but rarely deliver. - Kilogram60Royal Road★★★★ 4.0A fun and not overly serious story so far. The author is a self declared novice and it is evident in the story so far. Early chapters switch between tenses and formatting of conversation between characters is not separated.
My main concern with the story is how it has jumped between locations and character groups quickly and momentous events like getting a spaceship just fall into the MCs lap.
Having said all that, it is a fun jaunt and I will keep my eye on it. Congrats to the author for putting it out there and having a go.