Visah'Su

Self-Published

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Description

"I am the End, the Apocalypse, the harbinger of Ragnarok. I shattered the thrones of gods, and now, as I reclaim my form, my return is inevitable. Tremble, for my rebirth is at hand!"

"so?"

"So WHO TF STOLE MY BODY????????"

what you will be reading:

become an ancient mighty entity and tempt mortals in order to gather lost power and achieve resurrection.

I wrote the story in Japanese and I used AI help me translated.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: imhungry

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 4,332

Chapters(21 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

Ethan Y CottonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Alright then, I have to do this backward now because I am too excited about this story.
So here we go:
Let me start by telling you… read it, just do it, then thank me later!
I will attempt to break down why I enjoyed this so much but I won’t be able to do it justice, which I regret.
style: we have a reincarnation story… sort of. The main character is dropped into an over powered body part… yea. So the writing has no choice but to be unique and interesting. It is hard to compare this to another story with a similar style because it is just unique enough that I can’t think of something to properly compare it to. Great stuff!
story: our MC is an evil severed finger, attached to a pedophile priest. Prior knowledge of the world allows our MC to manipulate the priest into dancing like a puppet. It’s all very interesting, I will have to point you at the character section of this breakdown to keep these thoughts going but… the idea is great!
grammar: there are only a few minor errors, mostly words that I suspect autocorrect changed to the incorrect word. Nothing major and it doesn’t impede the story.
characters: holy crap, there is so much to unpack here. Everyone is messed up. Our MC is constantly talking the pedophile priest who he shares a body with into killing people. That is just as insane as it sounds. There is a razors edge to walk here, if any part of this is done poorly it could be very offensive or even just too much for people to stomach. Thus far it has been done very well in my opinion. If I could do so I would give the character portion of this review a 7/5 with a warning that it could easily drop to a 2/5 in one badly worded paragraph.
tldr: worth the read absolutely. But just don’t let the more sensitive stuff bother you.
bewareoftoadsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Anti-hero lead, evil world, a fun “gather the body parts to resurrect” quest- what more could you want??? MC Hiroshi is confined to a single finger, but through manipulating the scummy Ulu, he slowly gains control of Ulu’s body. Also Ulu is like shockingly well-written??? There’s a backstory for why he’s a scumbag- but he’s still undeniably a scumbag, and the MC plays him so easily. The worldbuilding concepts of gods and priests so far has been really intriguing, especially the corruption within the priests. The cycle of tormentors is handled so well!!
Style: Very solid! Author does a good job balancing the darkness of the world with Hiroshi’s thoughts. The world is built out slowly, and it never feels like there’s a bunch of exposition dump.
Story: So far, it’s strong! Hiroshi slowly talking Ulu into killing the other priest is great. Hiroshi is so good at playing god and pushing Ulu’s buttons. The fact that he’s handicapped by only being a finger and having to think his way through problems is really cool. Excited for the power ups when he gets more body parts back!!
Grammar: It’s strong 95% of the time. There are a few spots with awkward phrasing and a typo or two, but it’s pretty good.
Character: Talked about it a fair amount at this point, but yeah! Solid manipulative MC, no moral qualms about killing evil people. The power he has is fascinating, along with the method of progression by getting more body parts to resurrect.
finchinkRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I found this story to be extremely well done, especially from a pacing perspective. The opening chapter is gross and gripping and immediately draws you in, making you interested in where exactly the story is going. The next couple of chapters are well done and quickly delivered, with good conflict and unique ideas.
Style-wise perhaps their could be more immersion generated by describing the environment more but I feel like the more minimalist style helps with the excellent pacing of the story. He also does a good job with earning his info dumps. By the time he tells you more about this world, trust me you'll want to know about it.
One or two errors but in my opinion no big deal and it didn't take away from the fast-paced story he created. I know I keep mentioning how fast-paced it is and how it draws you in but once you read it you'll know what I mean.
I imagine the MC is harder to root for than most; however, he's fighting an evil bigger than himself, so that gets you to root for him so much and keeps the fights and story interesting.
I absolutely do recommend this story